Wow, never thought of Paranormal State fanfiction, great love it!!

Can I just say, I was bowled over when the demon marked him with the 'MINE' above his heart. In a way, it sort of juxtaposed Ryan's claim to Sergey's heart, as it were, and sort of forced him in the right direction in the blooming relationship. I loved it. Perhaps you could do something elaborative as to what becomes of the scar, etc. in your sequel?...which is hopefully coming soon?...because we all love this story and your writing and don't think we could make it much longer without a good dose of both??

Also, the "side order of domestic violence questionnaire" was a really striking line, very very well-written.

I can't find anything bad to say about any of this...I'm loving your Sergyan too much!

Okay, first of all...OHMYGOD THAT WAS AMAZING! :D I loved it, it was thrilling and sweet and just, ugh, it was awesome I adored it. One of the best Sergyan fics I've read ;DD You need to do a sequel, that would be so awesome!
Loved how you worked everything in, and I loved the short but sweet kiss at the end ^^ you need to put more of that in the sequel *hint hint* lol. Wonderful job! Keep it up! And post more!


xoxo,

Utah.

I'm so excited to see another "serg-yan" story in the archive now! When the pairing first started getting fic-mileage, I was so happy! It's even better now that it's growing. I really hope that whatever sequel you have planned for this comes out soon!

D-U-U-U-D-E! I was so waiting for when this story would get posted! Over all, I really really enjoyed it. It was cute in the extreme, VIVA LA SERGYAN!

Nice job. I was really impressed by the full Latin exorcism rites you typed up. Good example of research.

first time I'v read paranormal state and loved it :D great job :)

Oh hay.

So.

Like.

I freaking love this story.

And I freaking love you.

Just saying. :D