 Scanilla 2009-07-04 . chapter 1 Once again, well written and thought. I loved the five senses theme and the continuity of your drabbles! All of them were awesome and 1, 4 & 5 were my favorites. Suspense in the first one was great, I could feel it in the atmosphere as I saw the scene playing in my head. I loved this: "Sam could hear the rumble of the Impala in the background, and it sounded like broken speed limits." I also laughed at Dean's last line, lol! In the 4th one I adored the memory and the parallels between the past and present. Some things weren't meant to change, indeed! The last one is deliciously sweet while being hilarious. |
 Tatsumaki-sama 2009-06-06 . chapter 1This is so true, that whatever Sam catches, Dean will get. It's like a circle. What comes around goes around. ^^ I really liked the theme you centered on, about all five senses. It flowed really nicely with the rest of the story. |
 SimplyOut 2009-05-28 . chapter 1enjoyed it! |
 CowboySteel 2009-05-27 . chapter 1Great job :)
you know what would be supercool though...making the first one (it seems to shout "whumpage!" at me in an oh-so-alluring way :)) into a proper story/oneshot :)
it would be awesome :D
xoxoxo |
 JennK528 2009-05-26 . chapter 1Really well done - sweet without being cloying. And I enjoyed your clever working of the word into all the pieces... :)
(And I'm a total sucker for sick Dean.) |
 heartfallen 2009-05-26 . chapter 1I really enjoyed this. Great story |
 Mad Server 2009-05-26 . chapter 1Sam talking to keep wounded Dean awake at the wheel... vigilant Sam pressing Dean back onto the bed... Nurse Sam feeding Dean soup... shiny warm big brother Dean walking Sam across the street even though it makes him uncool... and a virus passed from one to the other. I kept having favourite parts... and then new favourite parts... because, so many good parts. And the amount of THOUGHT you put into it! *vigourous applause* |
 DeansBabyBird 2009-05-26 . chapter 1Hey MirrorDance
Welcome to the community and your fics are all nice. I like the sense of support the boys have for each other in each of them.They use the challenge word well but technically none is a drabble as they all exceed 100 words.
Maybe try and tell the story within the 100 word target next time?
DBB xx |
 Enkidu07 2009-05-26 . chapter 1Great summary of all of the times Dean has gotten into trouble when left alone by Sam... I hadn't realized what a theme that was until it was listed out like that.
Very fun stories and I think your use of the senses was inspired! |
 LivingForTv 2009-05-26 . chapter 1Hey, this was great! My favorite has to be the hands. Lovely! |
 sweetysmart0505 2009-05-25 . chapter 1Oh, those were all really good! Good job! |
 sylia91 2009-05-25 . chapter 1This was excellent! I really felt the love between the brothers and their dedication to one another. Loved this! |
 Twinchy 2009-05-25 . chapter 1Really nice start into the Challenge, Mirror with well-thoughtout situations. Well done (except for the respective word count ;-) - just kidding).
Great to have you on board. |
 PhoenixDragonDreamer 2009-05-25 . chapter 1Ye gods, you could write the phonebook and I'd be fascinated! This was glorious...
*hugs you tight*
Mandy |
 PlatinumRoseLady 2009-05-25 . chapter 1My goodness aren't YOU the talented one! So much Sick!Boys goodness...
Bravo! |