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Scanilla
2009-07-04 . chapter 1
Once again, well written and thought. I loved the five senses theme and the continuity of your drabbles! All of them were awesome and 1, 4 & 5 were my favorites. Suspense in the first one was great, I could feel it in the atmosphere as I saw the scene playing in my head. I loved this: "Sam could hear the rumble of the Impala in the background, and it sounded like broken speed limits." I also laughed at Dean's last line, lol! In the 4th one I adored the memory and the parallels between the past and present. Some things weren't meant to change, indeed! The last one is deliciously sweet while being hilarious.
Tatsumaki-sama
2009-06-06 . chapter 1
This is so true, that whatever Sam catches, Dean will get. It's like a circle. What comes around goes around. ^^ I really liked the theme you centered on, about all five senses. It flowed really nicely with the rest of the story.
SimplyOut
2009-05-28 . chapter 1
enjoyed it!
CowboySteel
2009-05-27 . chapter 1
Great job :)
you know what would be supercool though...making the first one (it seems to shout "whumpage!" at me in an oh-so-alluring way :)) into a proper story/oneshot :)
it would be awesome :D
xoxoxo
JennK528
2009-05-26 . chapter 1
Really well done - sweet without being cloying. And I enjoyed your clever working of the word into all the pieces... :)

(And I'm a total sucker for sick Dean.)
heartfallen
2009-05-26 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this. Great story
Mad Server
2009-05-26 . chapter 1
Sam talking to keep wounded Dean awake at the wheel... vigilant Sam pressing Dean back onto the bed... Nurse Sam feeding Dean soup... shiny warm big brother Dean walking Sam across the street even though it makes him uncool... and a virus passed from one to the other. I kept having favourite parts... and then new favourite parts... because, so many good parts. And the amount of THOUGHT you put into it! *vigourous applause*
DeansBabyBird
2009-05-26 . chapter 1
Hey MirrorDance

Welcome to the community and your fics are all nice. I like the sense of support the boys have for each other in each of them.They use the challenge word well but technically none is a drabble as they all exceed 100 words.
Maybe try and tell the story within the 100 word target next time?
DBB xx
Enkidu07
2009-05-26 . chapter 1
Great summary of all of the times Dean has gotten into trouble when left alone by Sam... I hadn't realized what a theme that was until it was listed out like that.

Very fun stories and I think your use of the senses was inspired!
LivingForTv
2009-05-26 . chapter 1
Hey, this was great! My favorite has to be the hands. Lovely!
sweetysmart0505
2009-05-25 . chapter 1
Oh, those were all really good! Good job!
sylia91
2009-05-25 . chapter 1
This was excellent! I really felt the love between the brothers and their dedication to one another. Loved this!
Twinchy
2009-05-25 . chapter 1
Really nice start into the Challenge, Mirror with well-thoughtout situations. Well done (except for the respective word count ;-) - just kidding).

Great to have you on board.
PhoenixDragonDreamer
2009-05-25 . chapter 1
Ye gods, you could write the phonebook and I'd be fascinated! This was glorious...

*hugs you tight*

Mandy
PlatinumRoseLady
2009-05-25 . chapter 1
My goodness aren't YOU the talented one! So much Sick!Boys goodness...

Bravo!
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