 AsianScaper 2009-11-08 . chapter 4This is fascinating and probably one of the best post-Salvation fics I've read thus far. I hope you continue, especially in the midst of such an engaging cliff-hanger. You've managed to weave a great story with great characters. Please continue; I'd like to know where you're going with this.
Thanks for the ride, so far, and I hope to read more from you. |
 sienna 2009-11-05 . chapter 4 Hi, I know it's been awhile since you updated this story, but I've just read the four chapters you have and they're really good! I hope you will continue writing the rest of this story, because I'm sure along with many others, I would very much like to read how it all turns out...it is a great adventure! I look forward to your next update, and hope it is soon. Thanks! |
 carnageincminor 2009-10-11 . chapter 4I am totally digging this story! Love the little insights to their characters and the plot development. You've written Marcus and Blair's relationship very well and I can't wait to read more of it. Great work. |
 donthateexpiate 2009-10-05 . chapter 2I can't wait to read more!
This is beautifully written, and it's a great story line! |
 DXRULES103 2009-08-17 . chapter 4Please more! I love the way you wrote this. |
 Hat O' Doom 2009-08-14 . chapter 4Nice update! |
 Sarisb 2009-08-09 . chapter 4I suppose it's too much to hope for that the two Army guys are on Blair's side, especially after one of them has already asked a "stupid" question? *sigh* :( <-- Army brat, can ya tell?
Well, that's pretty much the only complaint (and it isn't really a complaint,I think) against this entire fanfiction. I love it! I've been scouring to find any fics with Marcus in it, and I found this one to be pleasantly original and well written and quite possibly my favorite. I love the interaction between Marcus and Blair. I think it's good that you've avoided the trap of immediately rushing them into a relationship--it gives us readers something to look forward to. Please keep writing and I'll keep reading! |
 Yazoosama 2009-08-09 . chapter 4This is the first Terminator fanfic I have read as well (I really wanted to see a continuation of Marcus), and I have to say I'm glad I decided to read yours! Your writing is really extraordinary; I love that the tone and all that jazz fits so well with the Terminator series' style.
Anyways, your cliffhanger killed me. I want to read more! Can't wait to see more Blair and Marcus too! |
 Troo 2009-08-02 . chapter 4This is my first reading of any Terminator fanfic. Just read the Salvation movie novelization and realized that I wanted to read more about Marcus surviving.. and I found your story. :) I love it to bits. I really want to read more and I wanted to let you know that I think it's a really good story. Keep it up! :) |
 Becca 2009-08-02 . chapter 4 How could you leave it there? Arg! Great chapter, though. Marcus and Blair are so cute together! |
 bigbadjayne 2009-08-01 . chapter 4 Another powerhouse chapter, as always. But these cliffhangers of yours are just what keep me coming back for more.
Great work as always, ChristineX! |
 Spear-of-destiny 2009-07-30 . chapter 4I should be used to your cliffhangers by now, but...argh!
Again, Blair's and Marcus's interactions are great. And I liked how Marcus got all righteously indignant over the way the people at Elysium have just sat back and waited after Judgment Day. Sounds like that boy's growing a conscience!
Great update. I hope things slow down for you soon so you can write more. |
 Spelllesswonder29 2009-07-29 . chapter 4I loved it! Man i love all those little mentions of their attraction to each other!! Hurry with the next chapter! |
 Kairan1979 2009-07-29 . chapter 4Now that's funny, Dyson Jr. sitting and doing nothing, waiting for the sign. Blair is right to be furious!
I wonder how the base was discovered? |
 larkinlover 2009-07-28 . chapter 4Oh. Mai. Gawdt. Your writing is so..so..inspirational. I can't believe how amazing it is, my hands are shaking. You tell the story so brilliantly, with such incredible language (but still comprehensible!) that I feel my jaw dropping further and further down as I read. Write a book like this, and you're well on your way to being published. Oh, I just can't WAIT for the next chapter, I feel like I might explode. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update as soon as possible!
larkie |