she is a ** no queen ** thats better

if you can please update sooner please and thank you for this
story it is realy good

Loved it.
Keep writitng,
Motherduckatschool

Wow.
Loved it.
Keep writing,
Motherduckatschool

i love it

WO
Loved it.
Keep writing,
Motherduckatschool

wow.
Her mum is such as ** and she's so nice.
Loved it.
keep writing,
Motherduckatschool

WOW.
too good.
Keep writting,
Motherduckatschool

Dud dud dum
what will happen?
well i think it is great!!
continue to write,
Motherduckatschool

I do to.
You know for a show i know nothing about this is really good. keep writting,
Motherduckatschool

LOL.
Love the lie.
lol.
WEll alright i'll say it.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! lol
Well i love it.
write more soon,
Motherduckatschool

Great story. Continue to write more.
Motherduckatschool

Keep being melissa coz i think she will have more fun if she is Melissa. plus it's funny her mum having no clue. What mother would not notice. LOL. Keep writting.
Motherduckatschool

Okay, no nothing about Obon...? Sorry, tried :)
It's good though (y)

this story isn't so bad it is kind of good!

i've never read this story but in saying this it sounds good. you have set up a good base plot for the story, all you have to do is write from your heart and the story will be great. i look forward to reading more.