 jellymaster 2009-06-08 . chapter 1You know, I have to admit that I was skeptical about this fanfic at first, but it's actually a lot more interesting than it looked like it was going to be from just reading the summary by itself. The dialogue is really funny, and almost insane enough for it be from the show.
And GIR wearing a human female disguise to Mid-L Skool (genius misspelling there, by the way- that's seems exactly like how Jhnonen would purposely misspell it on the show!)- I can TOTALLY see that happening! XD I loved GIR's entrance into the classroom by ripiing the door from it's hinges! Hi-larious! XD
You should really get to continuing. I can only hope that this stays as funny as it is so far and I dearly hope that the OCs that you reffered to in the summary aren't going to be Mary Sues when they show up. Also, here's a tip on what NOT to do when you want lots of reviews: never, EVER threaten the readers into reviewing in some way.
The reviewers post their reviews as soon as they do and threatening them into it is definitely not the way to go. I hope you take my advice on that in your Author's Note in second chapter.
Over all, very amusing and well-written chapter! You seem to have a real talent for keeping your writing as cynical and twisted as the show is. Keep up the good work! Here's a cookie for such a funny chapter!
~Sincerely, Jellymaster! |
 silver bubble 2009-05-27 . chapter 1must obey the taco man!
TACOOS!
I totaly love the concept of Gir being a girl!
hm i wonder if zim will like the new girl?
Maybe she could meet zim and dib in some wierd way like bumping into them on the bus or something. like, the bus might move while she's still standing and fall.
But whateveh, it your story and i like it your way.
Good luck with your story Myriad Lapse!
thats a good name! |