This is getting good keep going you're doing a great job!

I kind of know how you feel. I am writting a story that is maybe not as confusing as yours and I will probably just stop writing that story because of the lack of reviews. only 3 reviews! But I understand how you feel and I can't wait to read your new story!

Haha, liked the chapter name. I also love how you gave history about katajajaka w/e the galaxy was called. Made me want to read more and more... then poof the chapter ended. Nice chapter!! And I like that new species you made up.

And heres some bad news; I won't be updating my story for a while. Going out of country for like 2 weeks... Haha good luck with your story, I'll be happy to read more.

Haha just read all the chapters, I got to say its looking real good. I like how Ratchet got drunk. Made me laugh hard. Keep it up.

I like this story :3 Little short but is good^^,

Haha great chapter; where did you come up with that name Kjataka! O.o Anyways boo a cliffhanger...

ooh good story u got going here... i definitely enjoyed these chapters!
keep up the great work! :)

Great story so far. Keep going with it! And a little complaint; I get kind of confused with you using ' instead of ", but anyways great story. Keep it up~ XD

Im loving this story already :D Keep it up!!