Loved the backwards in Contonese and something French...

Beautiful! A gem of a Doyle ghost story

Hey, this is Chikki again. I read this story and I just have to tell ya that it is very sweet. What'd I tell ya...you are a great writer. I truly believe that you have captured the true nature of Cordy, Angel and the rest of the characters as well.

The inclusion of Doyle was so right. The ending almost made me cry! Doyle was your (and my)fav. character right from the start! I'm glad you wrote a story about him...and portrayed him as really cute and adorable...

Your muse has certainly done a better job inspiring you ... I really hope there are many more to come.

Beautiful!

Love and poetry in one peice that was the most heart felt and beautiful thing I have ever read about in a long time. It was beauty, I loved it

Wow, I have a lot to say about this story. First of all, you really have a way with character dialogue. I loved how you portrayed Angel and Doyle. I loved and hated your idea of heaven making a person forget. I thought the Wesley jabbing was a little unnecessary, and Cordelia was a bit too perfect in the story. But this was beauitiful: " There was something beautiful in the way he talked to her tonight, a timbre in his voice that was shaky but strong at the same time."

Wonderful description of Doyle's night-long monologue. That was the best part.

Anyway, told you I had a lot to say. Good work :)

That was really good, almost nobody writes Doyle in anymore, which is a hudge shame! I loved how you put it the C/A and your one of the few authors I've read that can write the characters in just right :D I hope to see lots more from you in the future!

That was an amazing story, beautifully written.

Excellant. Now I miss Doyle :(

Aww, this story was so sweet. The characterizations, except for possibly in the case of Wesley, were terrific. This plot was wonderful and, to my knowledge, pretty original. The story itself was very memorable, and the dialogue was amusing. As I sort of mentioned earlier, my only complaint is your treatment of Wesley. He came across more as his season 1 or early season 2 persona than his character in season 3. At any rate, he was still recognizable as Wesley and its only a minor complaint. Good job, especially for a first work.

I loved it! Wonderful, absolutely fantastic characterization, beautiful play of the storyline. And I can definitely see them in this position, I'm amazed that no one else thought of it! Keep writing, and by the way, I'd love the see a sequel! (Hint, hint!)