Hi !

Your story is just amazing :)
I just got a sony reader, so i put your fanfic in it, and i enjoyed it in the subway in Paris ;)

So please, don't stop, especially not now. I like 24 and i like the way Renee is in your fanfic !

01) I feel no better than Tony! Ah, I forgot to read! I was checking my email and I had to work on a project (I was googling and I have a GMail... oops. haha) and I told myself I'd read it later but oh no!I'm sorry!
02) I really like that picture that's your profile picture. Is it you?
03) Ah, Season 7, always a fun thing to have! I bought it the day it came out XD and 24 Clue? That's awesome. My bitrthday... haha
04) Sadly, I didn't get any 24 stuff for Christmas! I racked up on Beatles stuff, but nothing 24! Except this chapter, that it :)
05) I love that name. Clayton.
06) :'( No Jack don't die! Whattheflip you're Jack Bauer YOU DON'T DIE!
07) Engaged? Oh, Clayton, say it ain't so!
08) Bauer killed Renee? Is that even possiab... well, I don't know!
09) Critical condition? Might be dead? No...
10) "There was no way Jack would have let anyone get to Renee when he was there." Awh!
11) Hahaha, Chloe and her Mac. btw, how's the Snow Leopard going? I saw an ad for one and thought of you :)
12) Renee Rolfe... I can't see it. Hahahahaha
13) Okay, Renee... let's not kill the doctor...
14) Oh, nice quote from Renee! *high five*
15) "'...And get me to Jack Bauer.'" YAYAYAYAY :D
16) "'I'm not surprised'...'he's Jack Bauer'" lol :)
17) Renee's not an idiot!... all of the time...
18) Oh, pretty boy Clayton's gettin' jealous... haha this makes me think of John Lennon's "Jealous Man" lol
19) No Chloe! Not her! Ah!
20) No, you imbesel, go to at FBI! STAY THERE!
21) Prison? Whatthef... oh yeah Tony *blusshy face*
22) Comparing Renee to himself? TONY HOW DARE YOU!
23) Yeah, Chloe and I think alike! Hahaha
24) Hahaa... 24...
25) JOSH!
26) *gasps for breath* M! *can't talk* M! *regains sanity* OMG JACH LOVES RENEE! Or... the other way around but... Renee would be obvious because Jack almost died, Jack symbolic because he almost killed her...
27) :D Next chapter here I... oh yeah I have to wait for it. *pouty face* Haha jkjkjk

This is a great story! I love it. Its well written, there are good authors notes, and good suspense.
I think you should update (like you said)...

Also, I have seen the previews...Did u also hear that it was the last season...then Again...it does get repetative...

Anyhoo, great story! Keep updating. I subscribed to you and your story.

Also, you should really be an author when you grow up.

Cheers,
-Zealir

better than I expected! man I want more chapters like this! thanks for the update!

very nice chapter and thank you for the update, i can not wait for the next one to come up. happy holidays toyou too.

amazing chapter, i really loved this one!
i've seen them all and Renee's supposed to be dark and damaged and maybe be undercover as a badie! !
can't wait !!
please update asap!

love this,
please keep going :)

great! come on i can't wait for more!

01) OHMYGOSH I'M SO HAPPY YOU UPDATED! HAPPY FLIPPIN' THANKSGIVING TO EVERYONE! Sorry, I'm overreacting. *blushy face*
02) Love that quote you have at the beginning; I'm going to have to look that up :)
03) YES! He moved on. I am so happy already and I'm not even three paragraphs into this.
04) Haha, Stephen all scared and thinkinh Jack's gonna shoot him... watch out, son.
05) Aw, it's Renee's weapon :)
06) "Stephen followed Jack's gaze across the road to a single feminine figure. Before he could ask Jack who she was, Jack sped off, wheels screeching in protest." Okay, so I'm listening to "Wonderwall" by Oasis while reading this, and I'm grinning like an idiot.
07) Crap! She can't know he's here?! Jack, get over it! She's gonna find you anyway because she's flippin' Renee Walker! Okay, sorry. lol
08) CR-V's rock :) and red is a beast color.
09) Love the gravestone saying. That''s just beautiful.
10) Oh, Renee's for the prez.
11) Aw Jack remembered like everything about his little FBI agent <3
12) "He definitely reconized her." lolz
13) "She told me never to lie to a federal agent again." I love your Stephen :)
14) I've never stayed in a Marriott; are they nice?
15) Ooh, Indian teal suit, I bet that's pretty with her hair color. Gosh, I need a life. Haha
16) "Jack rasped, 'I should have known better than to surprise you.'" lol I love that :)
17) "He leaned back and got off of her, extending a hand to help her up." Aw! I'm such a cheese donkey *lowers head* haha.
18) Uh, not the whole "Mr. Bauer", "Agent Walker" thing. :'( jk
19) Gosh, I hate it when I write a long review and the thing jumps up after every character :P Sorry.
20) "It whirred to life" Nice line :)
21) I LOVE BLEU CHEESE DRESSING! I don't care for Ceaser, though. lol
22) lol a ferrett.
23) "He was gazing at her." I just put "Wonderwall" on repeat. <3
24) lol 24. Sorry.
25) "A person or thing of peerless beauty or excellence;" Ohmygosh squee. Haha
26) I bought a baby name book for writing and one of the first names I looked up was Renee. I think it fits her well.
27) Josh would beast a SS.
28) No! Renee can't be dark! No!
29) "'Wedding rings too,' one of the men said roughly. 'Happy anniversary,'" Aw! That' sso sad! I feel really bad.
30) "There are many things that I would like to say to you but I don't know how..." Sorry "Wonderwall" quote.
31) lol Red.
31) Go Red! Haha jk you kick their butts, Renee :)
32) OHMYFLIPPIN'GOSH NO! YOU KILL JACK I KILL YOU! Not really, I don't know where you live :) lolz
33) Aw! Renee! Wake up! Get Jack! Save the day! Kill the bad people! THERE IS NO TIME FOR SLEEPING!
34) Not Chloe!
3) Good job on the Snow Leopard. Still having roubles? Aww I'm sorry :'(
36)Flip you! Christmas, REALLY? lol jkjkjk I understand and really that's pretty soon. I'm just on the edge.
37) I think more updates, shorter chapters would be nice. But that's just spazzy me. lol Whatever you want.
38) You just made my day with this :) hahaha.
39) Beast chapter title :)

very good chapter and am very glad that you updated it again. it really doesn't matter to me how the chapters are because i will still read it. thanks for the update.

UGGH! I hate you. No, jusk kidding. Since this will be the last review for a long, long time... (I'll start with the story)

0) Okay, I had to. What the crap with the author's note! No! I *just* got home from tennis (epic lose, the other school creamed us) and I see a new chapter, yes, and then I see the title and I'm like "CRAP!" So yeah, that's bad. Hahaha :)
1) A. Okay, real review. First off-- Renee so should be concerned! Hahaha, eh, what do I know?
B. I kinda get that because Chloe isn't concerned.
2) YES! JACK DOES NOT GO BACK TO THE TURNIP!! Err... Audrey. *blushy face*

Aww, that's all I got! Oh well, there... *sniffle* are... other... *dramatic sob*... fic... oh I just can't do this!!
Hahaha just kidding. I will miss this though. Dramatically :)

HELLO...I'M EXPECTING THE NEXT CHAPTER...SO DON'T LAST TOO MUCH

ohmygoshohmygoshohmygoshoohmygoshohmygosh it's BACK! And (hopefully) better than ever!

*one chapter later*

I'm not going to comment on everything this time but I've finished reading this chapter and HOW COULD YOU?! Jack's leaving Renee for the Turnip? Okay, sorry, you may like Audrey (?!?!) and if so, I'll call her by her formal name. But what the heck? *#$@^! REALLY? Hahaha, it's still a J/R fic so I'm guessing Renee finds Jack (who hopefully found out that the Turnip... er... Audrey died) and...? Oh well, you're the author (but to quote Liem Neeson- If Renee finds Jack WITH Audrey... "I will find you. And I will kill you." Hahaha, I love Taken). But Jack was thinking all about Renee and all and why would he leave her and earlier in the ambulence he said he WOULDN'T leave her and... sorry, ramble. BUT STILL YES AN UPDATE! I saw where Smoke and Mirrors was supposedly updated but it says 'link broken' or something :P Oh well, I realy hope this stays a J/R fic :) Still... YES AN UPDATE!

When are you gonna come back to finish the story? Don't leave us hanging! Update!

HELLO. ARE YOU GOING TO CONTINUE THIS STORY? IT'S GREAT!