 adare1 2009-09-12 . chapter 1Wow, your writing is great. I love the way you describe Lee's thoughts and feelings - it is simply wonderful. Hope you'll be writing more soon! |
 cajun panda 2009-06-02 . chapter 1While at first glance I would say that there is really nothing special about this story, it just seems natural and comfortable. I have a good feeling after reading it. Does that make sense? I hope you take this as positive feedback, because that's how I mean it. Obviously, you are better at expressing yourself than I. Thanks for writing this. |
 Jennifer Cannon 2009-05-27 . chapter 1Wonderful filler for one of my favorite episodes and a very insightful look into Lee's thoughts after the Karen incident. Been having severe computer problems--reading stories like this keeps me sane--just wonderful. Thank you :)
-Jennifer |
 SpyGirl1969 2009-05-27 . chapter 1I've always wondered if Lee had any lingering doubts after the events in that episode... well done! I enjoyed this little piece very much!
sg |
 resourceful 2009-05-26 . chapter 1A very nice extension to a the episode. You beautifully filled in the aftermath of a frightening storyline -- of course, both Lee and Amanda would struggle with the memories and the near-miss.
I particularly liked your vivid descriptions, such as "doubt and fear played their duet; this was their hour."
Thank you for sharing. I hope we see more SMK from you. |
 Loretta the Contessa 2009-05-26 . chapter 1liked the story. very good |
 charlie 2009-05-25 . chapter 1 Hey - I really liked this. You got the awkward "we have feelings but neither of us are willing to admit it" down pat. Very believabled for the series. Good job! |
 ermintrude421 2009-05-25 . chapter 1This is a hauntingly good story. I wasn;t aware Odds was an obligatory topic for SMK writers--but you did it justice. Hopefully you'll do more SMK infuture--your stuff is good. |