"They said you are fifteen years old. Fifteen! How can I even begin to understand that? For how long does a sunrise last? How many sunrises make up the sum of your years?"

i remember that line, it was definitely a favorite of mine.

oh geale. i know i said i'd send you a postcard, from spain, i didn't. so i hope that by writing you raving reviews, you won't be angry at me.

although i'd still write you raving reviews. gosh. this one, of course, must've been hard to turn from the smut that everyone's writing all the time that seems to be more or less the same. but no worries, you did a great job! tense, angsty, but also happy. i'm so giddy over the happiness! and your descriptions--everything is so perfect. you don't waste your words.

so sweet, and unsure, but ready to love. the few lines about aragorn wanting to be an adult, even though being a human means that adulthood brings him closer to death, is clever.

all in all, you're wonderful, amazing, talented, etcetc. wondrous job!! <3 love it, of course.

VERY GOOD! I loved it! I absolutely love the way you described the emotions and what they felt. I adore the way they were both so concerned about hurting one another. I just loved it! It made me *tingle*. ;) LOVED THE STORY! I might suggest that you do another one about the first time between two other characters. Merry and Pippin, perhaps? I think that would be VERY good! If you do write one like that, I have but one request: try to be a little more detailed in the love-making. In this one, I think their completion happened a tad too fast. I still LOVED the story, though! :):):):)

Beautiful continuation to a beautiful series. Bravo!

Alright. I must confess, I have read it at the day you posted, but I couldn't review just like that, because I just did not know what to say. Just praising, as always, this time will not do, for you have wrote something which made me think deeper about two things. They are somehow connected to each other.

First thing, why people write fanfiction? Cannot they just be content they have original books? Thay cannot. And they are writing, for they want to see pairings and love scenes unforgivable for the original Author^^ and it's *evil*, yess, but also huge fun. Yet these scenes are normally super-passionate, full of desire, sometimes with no logical background, with ideas no less shocking than impossible. I saw you for the first time, let's go to bed! So yay!

And what we have here? two teenagers, scared and uncertain, shyly commiting their first time. Who of those 'normal' fanfictioners writes such a scene? (Not cool at all, pf.) You prove me that at there are those who see true beauty where it really is.

LoL. No need to hide. It was great! Can't wait for the next installment. So far this series has been most enjoyable.

I loved this. The slow revelation and exploration of love was wonderful. I hope you write more of this series, and that your new series will be just as good.

Beautiful. I know I have probably used that word many times before, but it is the one hat fits your style best. Your language posseses the same grace as the elves, making the style and the plot fit together perfectly

Dang, someone reviewed before me. SNAPS!
Ahhuhauhdushleoejbbabbutthsurpelakdlskrrkjakneeolpawjjhemzdbgst!! WOW! There are no words to describe it. Umm..lets see. First of all, YAY that you updated. NAY cus you took so long *beats you with balloon*. EEHEE so happyhappyjoyjoy-filled cus you updated and that the story met my expectations PURFEKTLY! Im going to have to read this like 16 more times now, and then I'll be reading the whole series regularly. It was SO GOOD!! I loved the awkwardness, its so THEM. They were like, "Ahem, soo..you didnt do it with..any..one??" .."Uhh, not..not really.." AHEMCOUGHTURNAWAY..haha! Question: how long would you say it lasted for? I swear Im just curious, you can NEVER tell really by reading one of these things. Its a very important question that could possibly save world hunger, so I suggest you answer it if your morals are important and sentimental and all that shnitz.
AHHGH sore throat is spreading in my house like frikkin swine flu! Or the Black Death..I have to be careful not to kiss my little sweet nephew..and I burnt my finger..AND..ahem..I believe Estel ate a lot of watermelon the day before this update, hehe, if you get what I mean..cough..PLEASE tell me this is not the end to it! IF IT IS YOU HAVE TO WRITE A WHOLE NEW STORY ABOUT THEM! It is just CRUEL for you to stop here..I might just tell my nephew bad horrible things about you and then if he ever sees you he'll throw le oranges at you and I wont be able to do anything about it, I mean, his manners not mine ;) JAYKAY, HE WILL HEART YOU.
~BGE (*screeches annoying things about updating, ye little minx)

YOU, my friend, have absolutely no need to hide. I love it. You convey their emotions most wonderfully, the whole part has a feeling of peace and sacredness and I, romantic being that I am, am really glad to see those two together.
I loved the idea of Aragorn asking his brothers about the mechanics of lovemaking - that must indeed have been extremely embarassing.
A shame to hear that the end is coming soon. But I will also happily feed on new ideas of yours. (-:

Thank you for another great part of this series!