Nice

Very good.

Wow! Are you gonna write more! Please tell me you are! Its a really good fic! Email me when and if you do!

Cool I liked the way you did this and the way you added Trunks's thoughts, keep the good work up ok

Oh, how sad!

ah.. i just love these father/son stories. this one was reallly well written. i like very much.

Awwwwh thats so sweet. I love this fic. So wonderful. Keep it up

That was wonderful. I love these fics that go into the relationship between Trunks and Vegeta, whether it's chibi Trunks (he's so kawaii!) or Mirai Trunks. Yours is the second one I've read tonight (er... *looks at clock and realizes it's after 3 am* or maybe I should say this morning...), and I loved the way it showed how both of them felt, and yet how Trunks doesn't understand his father enough to realize how proud his father is of him.

I think you showed both of their spirits really well here. I love fics that go into characterization this way, and you did a good job. :-)

Ya know, it's people like you who make this site so great. I just got done reading some other DBZ fic, and the countless grammatical errors gave me such a migraine. But then, I read yours, and I just wanna say, dear Gods, praise the spirits for authors like you! It's wonderful when you can find a story that has not only good writing etiquette, but has a worthwhile imagination behind it. I'm glad there are more of us out there. ;)

Ah! That's all? Ah! Hurry up and post, I'm quite interested now!

In the anime, when they showed King Vegeta, he hardly seemed like a child beating asshole. If you ask me, the reason Vegeta grew up to be heartless in the first place was because of Freeza.

Great songfic! Personally I thought that was a great scene, where Vegeta and Trunks are in the gravity room. I loved how you incorporated Vegeta's past and had him compare himself to Trunks! And the thing about the tears...that's so sweet! *melts* Keep up the good work!

Hi again! Sorry, I just couldn't get over ur fic, it's just so sweet :) I was wondering if I could use this fic on my new Trunks site, I couldn't find ur email so I'm asking u here :) Email me plz :) If u dun wanna let me use ur fic, I understand :)

awwwww if only Trunks had seen Veggie brain watching him *sigh* _ For a first attempt at angst I think you did a nice job! The lyrics went perfectly along with the fic! You should wirte more like this! .

Now *that* waz a very kewl story! _ Did the thing in the gravity room really happen in the show? If it did, I CAN'T wait til DBZ comes back on in Aust. Grrrrr, we're like behind by a yr X-(

Well, anywayz, great job, cuz I luved thid fic :)