AWWWWW ! ADORABLE ! THIS IS MY FAVE PAIRING ! ... Besides antova and otto of course ! XP

Continue this story plz i am really desprate

and gibbson seems cool as Hal :D

You have to continue this it a great story

You have some really nice detail when you use it. :) But it also felt kinda rushed, mainly at the scene transition.

I think, to help this, it would have worked better if you'd worked the fact that it was a few minutes later into the prose instead of saying it in all caps at the top. That's actually a technique for script writing, and in the middle of a work of this format it comes across awkward and lazy.

Hope this helps. :)

this is not going to end well... Mandarin might turn up and use this against them. when Nova does find out though, she should still love Gibson because of who is not because of Hal.

i mean like that Hal opened her up to him and Gibson continues it... if that makes sense...

wow awsome pelase contiue :3

Suggestions? I'll give ya some... If you want to do a true gibbova story then this is not the way to put them together. Nova has to love the true brainiac. I suggest you make Gibson lose his memory AGAIN and then get his old memory back and forget about being Hal. And if Gibson got his true personility back he is WAY to proud to hide it

The story is good so far, but the flow of the story is sort of choppy. You might want to work on the transitions between scenes.

I liked it, I don't know why, I just did. Gibova is kinda cute, if you look at it in a certain light. Still, I wonder, what will happen when 'Hal' turns back into Gibson? I guess I'll never know until it comes! Can't wait for an update!

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NO! I HOPE GIBSON GETS HIS MEMORY BACK SOON AND IF NOVA WERE TO FALL FOR HIM SHE SHOULD FALL FOR GIBSON NOT HAL... I DONT LIKE HAL...

aww that was cute! me likey. ;3

Well I'm not a huge fan of Gibova but I'll help ya out, how about the city is under attack and Gibson has to stay behinde due to his loss of memorie, during the battle Nova gets injured,(Gibson saw this with his out side camera so he could watch the whole fight) so he trys to go to Nova's rescue but ends up hurt (more hurt than the one he was trying to save) and when Gibson is healing in the med bay, Nova tells her secert about her loving him, and he admits that he loves her as well. I dont pressure you into doing this scene its just a suggestion for you So you dont have to do it.

lawl xD aw

cute XD pelase contiue

*Smirks.* Once again, very intersting. You should have "Hal" get a little jealous in the future of a certain cocky pilot. XD

Update soon!