 Thunderstorm101 2009-09-30 . chapter 3Aw...
I guess it just wouldn't be Crowley if he didn't have superiors that never call him by the name he calls himself. |
 ruff1298 2009-09-26 . chapter 3Well, this chapter was rather short and lacking in large paragraphs, but the whole thing is actually pretty interesting still. I just wish that you had written more in detail what they did after leaving the Ritz for more content to read, but I'm somewhat satisfied with this. |
 Ocicat 2009-09-10 . chapter 3 wo, update :D
mmh, still stuck on wondering how 'zira fell in the previous chapter, and for that matter what prompted the whole switching, very intriguing storyline! :love: |
 Archivist 2009-09-08 . chapter 3This ending? It's win. |
 Ian Keenan 2009-09-07 . chapter 3Different again, this time both of them on the same side, nice interplay between the two, shows up well how long they have known each other. Aziraphel was really stressed about his new opposite, but I think he'll get on fine now. Great short! |
 Doctor Jax 2009-09-02 . chapter 2 *snicker* I thought that was interesting. Aziraphale Falling and Crowly Rising Up. Now THAT is an engaging plot line. I enjoyed it, though it had a bit much angst for me. Loved Crawly's jealosy over the leviathans. >< Can't wait for the alternative ending! |
 indigo's ocean 2009-08-16 . chapter 2This made me happy - in a sort of angsty kind of way, the beginning part anyway - and more than that, it made me really curious about your "other ending".
The way you have Aziraphale & Crowley interact is so cute! And realistic - completely in character!
And I love the bit about Crowley being jealous of the leviathans. Well done and I look forward to reading more!
~indigo |
 ruff1298 2009-08-16 . chapter 1Crowley actually being redeemed is highly unlikely, yes, but it does make for some interesting plot material. I like the idea, but the small paragraphs and lack of more action coming from the large gathering of angels for a big hoo-haa for the repented soul/s was rather unfitting of the scene of several thousands of holy beings partying.
It's a decent starting chapter, but it does, however, need some improvement. |
 Persikka 2009-08-10 . chapter 1 This was nice. Me thinks you should continue it, atleast I want to know what did happen to Aziraphale. Did he Fall *snicker*
And what about poor Crowley, having to deal with all that... |
 anonymouse27 2009-06-26 . chapter 1oh. cant wait to see what happens next. continue, whatever ending you choose! |
 Archivist 2009-06-15 . chapter 1Awesome. Crowley as an angel? More awesomeness. Please end ths! |
 indigo's ocean 2009-06-09 . chapter 1This sounds, hmm, brilliant. I forgot how much I loved 'Good Omens'. And how much I loved fanfiction... and this is the first Good Omens fanfic I've ever read. With that said, you kept Pratchett/Gaiman's wry sense of humor very well. Especially with the scones and ginger beer. Pfft.
I'm interested to see how this turns out! :D
~indigo |
 Rebecca The Animorph 2009-05-28 . chapter 1This sounds interesting; I hope you update soon. |