Oh dearie, I laughed hysterically at the turnip line, written ironically months before our moment in class.

"Scarlette's face is red LIKE A TURNIP!"

You, darling, are a comical genius. I regret waiting until my sick day to read this story.

Love love love love LOVE the ending. I love how you made the tone so that we can see the innocent schoolboy Ishida. Great one, this.

SO CUTE!

haha. That was really sweet and silly.

So sweet and cute, but there's one little detail in it that bugged me. Both Ishida and Inoue call everybody by their last names. In Japanese, which name you use and how you use it are indications of how familiar, formal and/or respectful two people are toward each other. (That's why it bugs Byakuya and Toshirô that Ichigo calls them by their first names.) It's often a big deal when someone calls the person they're interested in by their first name for the first time.

That's so cute!! (Huge Ishida fan) I love the elegance in your words, the way they fit together so beautifully!

Very well done!

Very sweet. They're perfect together.