When are you going to put in new capter's huh?

DAM IT! WHY DID YOU DO IT TOMMY WHY?

poor guy...it made me feel sad and really angry at Tommy...

Again, awfully melodramatic. But the the ending was a twist that I honestly didn't see coming. That was neat, and makes me excited about the next chapter .

*gasp* He did NOT just use the H word on Tommy did he? ohh man the poor guy is really upset you absolutly MUST finish this story it's sad but good.

Aw Poor Ro this is good please weite more :)

That was pretty intense for a relatively short first chapter. I like it so far, and I can hardly wait to see what happens next!