|Reviews for Clouded Emerald|
| jj 2/21/13 . chapter 1
you already have a plothole at the begining of the story.
Why would Harry go live with "muggles" when he would have been just as safe with his mother.
He would still have had the same blood protection as he did with his aunt possibly even stronger since his parents would have actually wanted him. Not only that but he would not have been ignorant about the wizarding world and would have been comfortable with magic since according to you his parents would still be able to do minor feats of magic
| moonprincess97524 1/14/13 . chapter 10
I was just thinking about something, when Harry was first informed that his parents lived he was told that they were little more then squibs because of the magic that they used to servive the killing curse, I thought that it took a lot of magic to be able to turn into an aniaimal so how can James turn into Prongs if he has so little magic?
| NightWithMoon 11/1/12 . chapter 1
... It just doesn't make sense. Dumbledore may be manipulative, but he's also brilliant - either you can have him be evil (wanting harry to be abused, and making sure everyone who would prevent it is out of the way) or you can have him be benevolent, in which case the scenario you present would never have come to pass.
(also you have the potters casting dark magic to protect themselves from the killing curse, but completely disregarding the protection of their first and only child? Not likely).
| JlovesGaara 10/26/12 . chapter 13
This story is amaaaazing! I am so sad to see it discontinued. You are a great writer!
| tierce japhrimel 10/26/12 . chapter 1
what the fuck kinda reaction is that from Harry? grrr... such a build up of angst and a total let down for delivery... pffft
| amata0221 7/1/12 . chapter 13
Great story, please continue this.
| mary blackman 3/23/12 . chapter 13
i loved this story if you ever update or do a sequel please send me the link
| Lizzosaur 3/22/12 . chapter 13
| WarriorDarkAngel 11/21/11 . chapter 1
I am all for Harry/Jasper :)
| yaoipotterfan 11/20/11 . chapter 1
| Obsessive Insomniac 10/16/11 . chapter 13
I like this so far! It was such a bad place to stop updating it too :( its well written and has a good story line
| yukino89 7/8/11 . chapter 13
| Son of the Marauders 6/30/11 . chapter 13
will you please update your story soon thank you
| RiverLily09 6/2/11 . chapter 13
Would love an update. I think that this story is great. A wonderful mix between the cannons and original material. Between Harry's parents and the Edward/Bell, Rosalie/Bell, Emmett/Harry?Edward it looks real interesting. I can't wait 'til the others share their stories to the Cullens, and how they will react to the Golden Trio's early adventures. I am also interested in how Harry intimidated the Voltorie; that seems to be an exiting story. Please continue this storry soon.
| Netti 4/3/11 . chapter 13