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Reviews for: Keep Me Captive, Save My Brother
enviousxbeauty
2009-06-11 . chapter 1
Aww I just loved this it was great!
JenF
2009-05-29 . chapter 1
Ah - just what the doctor ordered. The perfect drabble with a little extra on the side. And you've managed to include the sentence that always turns me to jelly inside:

"Dean, I'm here. You're safe."

Thank you :)
ApplePieeLovver
2009-05-27 . chapter 1
Perfect. So simple and exquisite!
Vampyvii
2009-05-26 . chapter 1
Hi - You've got a pretty darn good Muse there, Sweety- And expanding the initial drabble into a little story was a great idea -- Good job!
sidjack
2009-05-26 . chapter 1
Wow! That was intense, so much pain and the whole captured issue. I am amazed how well this flowed and I loved Dean's wandering pain filled mind, and when he finally realized it was Sam.
Perfect that Sam could make him so much better.
Oh, and loved Dean being a great teacher and student.
sid
Dream Painter
2009-05-26 . chapter 1
Aw! I really like this. The boys always look out for each other and you've captured it beautifully.

That last line is my favorite. Nicely done. ^^
Mad Server
2009-05-26 . chapter 1
Love me some disoriented Dean and has-his-back Sammy.
LivingForTv
2009-05-26 . chapter 1
Ehrm, well, I can tell you I saw this being played out. I am a bit squemish about torture scenes but, considering the skill with which people, and you among them, write them I have a feeling I will end up writing one myself one day. The best part of this drabble though was the recovery, and I simply loved the last line! You are great, keep at it!
sunnyjunedays
2009-05-26 . chapter 1
Hi, Perfect hurt Dean/comfort Sammy. Could have read this over and over again. Loved it, thanks. x
Enkidu07
2009-05-26 . chapter 1
This was really fun. Love your 'official drabble' and especially love the follow up comfort that I would have been begging for. I like that Dean thought he was still captive because the cleaning hurt so much. And I really liked how we got a glimpse of how upset Dean was getting through Sam's soothing words. Well crafted!
1983Sarah
2009-05-26 . chapter 1
Great job, dear. Really felt the hurt and the comfort in this one!
InSecret
2009-05-26 . chapter 1
Yay, hero Sam! Poor Dean. This was cool, especially Sam in the second part, so upset but steady and caring at the same time. Nice work :)
mssammydean
2009-05-26 . chapter 1
Oh Dean...i'm very glad Sam got to him in time. What a hero. Poor baby...
Twinchy
2009-05-25 . chapter 1
Heart-breaking scene(s). I'm so glad that Sam did make it in time to save Dean. This must have been so hard on the older Winchester, considering.

Yeah, I believe you're probably right. Being held captive, is now going to remind Dean of Hell, always - whatever the cause and whoever the snatcher. All those decades 'down under' without safety for even one moment, that's left scars on the soul for sure.
Nana56
2009-05-25 . chapter 1
Oh yeah! This was great! The drabble part was really nice and the rest was just wonderful. I love the capture stuff and the rescue and care part, too. *sigh*

Nice job. *pets your muse*
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