aw, poor Mojo. whenexactly do you plan to update? I'm still waiting! p.s. this is the 1st time I reviewed anything online.

yay! I LOVE Moko Jono! but there aren't that many of her:(

uh, what happened here?

This story is very intriguing. I like how you've described the scenes, with some detail but not enough to overwhelm the reader (like, you haven't gone all out with describing their appearance - as in clothing - or such, which is good). Also, I think that the pairing, Mojo x Moko, definitely has potential to become an interesting story which I can see happening in yours. :D

All in all, a fascinating piece of fiction. I cannot wait to read more!

~ Blue

Hm..this is an interesting start. Not sure what to make of this so far, but the ending definitely has me interested.

~Dracori

This is really creepy so far! Also I have to admit you write Him the best I've seen on this site. Good job!