Aw, this is so cute!

You are so right about everyone liking a good marlene story. The story was adorable beyond reason. And I liked clouds last line.

haha ! I can imagine this happening, i love their reactions!

LOLOLOLOLOLOL! I love everyones reactions! HAHAHAH! this is great!

hahaaha that was funny! maybe you can write more then just keeping it as a one-shot cause i now ill love to read more