THIS. is. epic.

LOL

This story reminds me of my chapter request (Ch.34) of the popular "Deliveries"

poor Cloud on a pink bicycle! He has to peddle it all the way to Healing Lodge! lol. This story caused me fits of laughter!

Nice story. The revelation was pretty funny. I’d shorten “vehicle of transportation” through as it sounds strange. As for when it’s used in the story, in my opinion, “She handed him Yuffie’s keys” would have sufficed.
The first letter in dialogue is capitalize as if it were the beginning of a sentence, like this: X said, “This is a nice day.”
I also liked you mention of how Cloud drove his motorcycle.