OMG... I SO love this story so far! What a gem! :)

amazing once again, please update soon

-bella

this was really good!

awesome!

can not wait for more!

thank you!

excellent

I love the chapter. Very interesting, the other half vampire wants to be changed? Can that happen? i hope she doesn't do anything too stupid or expose the Cullens.

I hope the girl doesn't run

hehe, funny ending. And I did wonder if Audrey would make anyother apperance (or rather mentioning seeing as she was only mentioned earlier). But yay she has and that means benjamin and Tai too - I like Benjamin's character.

I look forward to reading chapter 24.

* hannah *

This is great, cant wait for more

-bellA

Maybe Rose could adopt Audry? That would appease Rose and give Audry someone to look up to. Just a thought if you haven't already gone there.

"People don't have posse's anymore" AH HA HA HA! I always thought it would have been funny for Edward to be taught how to talk like he's living in the 21st century! So for him to use a word like posse was hilarious!

Also, I'm enjoying Bella using her shield! Great story so far!

This sounds like it's going to be a good story!

Well, first off, awesome chapter. Secondly, so you're making Anatoli like the, oh what's his name...the leader of teh Egyptian coven in Breaking Dawn. You know who i mean - i hope. Anyway, him. yeah. And thirdly, congratulations. You have succesfully introduced the Jacob/Renesmee relationship.

Wel, back to the first point, this chapter was really awesome. And so was teh last one. I didn't get a chance to review it because you updated this chapter before i logged back on, and i didn't see the point in reviewing chapter 21 when i'm am literally about to read chapter 22. Anyway.

I look forward to chapter 23.

* hannah *

Great chapter!

will there be a battle? I really like Gabriel's gift.

Great stroy cant wait for more

-bella