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cerebral-mess 2/1/12 . chapter 1
OMG that was so funny xDDD ! won't you do another chapter to it?
alyuchiha913 8/24/11 . chapter 1
ROTFLMAO! Oh my...that ending was priceless! Haha. Loved it. Cool fic XD

Peace Out! _
KoiGirlPGSM 5/20/11 . chapter 1
XD
BlankedProfile 9/19/10 . chapter 1
You know, this is my second time reading this chapter and the first time I spent about 10 minutes trying to figure out how cleaning by your self was perverted. I mean people who live alone do it! But after reading this for the second time I gave up on trying to figure it out...untill I read Starflower's mini stories. Suddenly it made loads of sence! I have to say this, you are an awesome writer! I love reading your stories, I think I might look up your published ones when I get the chance and use my moms account(since i'm only 15), she doesn't have to know whats in the books I read XD But it's not like it matters since I watch horror movies and everyone knows that there isn't a horror movie out there without sex.
KandyKane95 11/18/09 . chapter 1
OMG, this is so freaking funny! Great story, when will you be writing moree?
meteor prime 11/18/09 . chapter 1
XD! I'm literally laughing out loud at the mo. I'm so glad no ones out here with me! XD ... Eww Blitzy didn't flush... I love their dialogue. Especially the bit about Alpha Trions retarded-ness! Absolutely hilarious fic. Megatron's a perv for having a video in Blitzwings toilet... hehehe... He's watching you!- Poop.

Till all are one

Meteor prime
shadow halfbreed 10/20/09 . chapter 1
lol, very good for a laugh.

the end got me in a fit of giggles.

nice work -
Kibble Beast 6/30/09 . chapter 1
oh, this was too funny.

loved starscreams seductiveness. :P

all the characters were great xD

you must do more!
Megacheesedoodle 6/22/09 . chapter 1
omfg
that made me giggle so much! lolz :D

loved it! lolz

wow i have tears in my eyes...:3

loves Meta Murr Creampuff
ShiTiger 6/9/09 . chapter 1
LOL! Especially love that last bit!
Amanda Saitou 6/5/09 . chapter 1
Oh, that was very good one! Screamer watching Megs at the end was the best, was he admiring his mighty leader? How fluffy!*smirks*
Garcia-316hellyeah 6/3/09 . chapter 1
*ROFL* XP Please hurry the sequel
BiloxiBlueberry 5/30/09 . chapter 1
*dies laughing* I don't know if I'm just in a silly mood right now, but this was hilarious. *goes to fave it*
black dragon 5/27/09 . chapter 1
oh i love this this is giving me ideas for my own comedy fic. lol
xx-fyrefly-xx 5/27/09 . chapter 1
Haha! Amazing. I laughed out loud. For realz.
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