 cerebral-mess 2/1/12 . chapter 1OMG that was so funny xDDD ! won't you do another chapter to it? |
 alyuchiha913 8/24/11 . chapter 1ROTFLMAO! Oh my...that ending was priceless! Haha. Loved it. Cool fic XD
Peace Out! _ |
 KoiGirlPGSM 5/20/11 . chapter 1XD |
 BlankedProfile 9/19/10 . chapter 1You know, this is my second time reading this chapter and the first time I spent about 10 minutes trying to figure out how cleaning by your self was perverted. I mean people who live alone do it! But after reading this for the second time I gave up on trying to figure it out...untill I read Starflower's mini stories. Suddenly it made loads of sence! I have to say this, you are an awesome writer! I love reading your stories, I think I might look up your published ones when I get the chance and use my moms account(since i'm only 15), she doesn't have to know whats in the books I read XD But it's not like it matters since I watch horror movies and everyone knows that there isn't a horror movie out there without sex. |
 KandyKane95 11/18/09 . chapter 1 OMG, this is so freaking funny! Great story, when will you be writing moree? |
 meteor prime 11/18/09 . chapter 1XD! I'm literally laughing out loud at the mo. I'm so glad no ones out here with me! XD ... Eww Blitzy didn't flush... I love their dialogue. Especially the bit about Alpha Trions retarded-ness! Absolutely hilarious fic. Megatron's a perv for having a video in Blitzwings toilet... hehehe... He's watching you!- Poop.
Till all are one
Meteor prime |
 shadow halfbreed 10/20/09 . chapter 1lol, very good for a laugh.
the end got me in a fit of giggles.
nice work - |
 Kibble Beast 6/30/09 . chapter 1oh, this was too funny.
loved starscreams seductiveness. :P
all the characters were great xD
you must do more! |
 Megacheesedoodle 6/22/09 . chapter 1omfg
that made me giggle so much! lolz :D
loved it! lolz
wow i have tears in my eyes...:3
loves Meta Murr Creampuff |
 ShiTiger 6/9/09 . chapter 1LOL! Especially love that last bit! |
 Amanda Saitou 6/5/09 . chapter 1Oh, that was very good one! Screamer watching Megs at the end was the best, was he admiring his mighty leader? How fluffy!*smirks* |
 Garcia-316hellyeah 6/3/09 . chapter 1*ROFL* XP Please hurry the sequel |
 BiloxiBlueberry 5/30/09 . chapter 1*dies laughing* I don't know if I'm just in a silly mood right now, but this was hilarious. *goes to fave it* |
 black dragon 5/27/09 . chapter 1oh i love this this is giving me ideas for my own comedy fic. lol |
 xx-fyrefly-xx 5/27/09 . chapter 1Haha! Amazing. I laughed out loud. For realz. |