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Reviews for: What If Harry Never Broke Up With Ginny
David Fishwick
2009-06-24 . chapter 4
Please update soon as I am enjoying the story. Thanks for writing.
Tabbyprincess
2009-06-22 . chapter 3
Why josh, I had no idea you were such a romantic.
I.love.boys.in.books.
2009-05-28 . chapter 3
I really enjoyed reading this story. I am interested to see Harry and Ginny's love grow!
HMMadewell
2009-05-28 . chapter 3
silly hermione
David Fishwick
2009-05-28 . chapter 3
Thanks for updating and please write more as I am enjoying the story.
David Fishwick
2009-05-27 . chapter 2
Cool and please update soon thanks.
QuirkyOne
2009-05-27 . chapter 2
a good start :) looking forward to reading more! XD

QuirkyOne x
Blu Taiger
2009-05-26 . chapter 1
Okay, you seem to be off to a good start.
My only recommendation would be to flesh out the dialog a bit - add more descriptions about what's going on.
Oh, and this one sentence by Hermione, “Tell her about the horcruxes she has a right to know now.” ought to have some punctuation in it. Like, “Tell her about the horcruxes. She has a right to know now.” Something like that.

Well, I hope this will be the first of many reviews. See you in chapter 2!

--Blu Taiger
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