This is really good I love it! Hope you plan on finishing the story if your are I can't wait. Again love love love it!

Bravo! Please continue! Such a story should not be left hanging!

Aw, I really wish this was continued, it's really really good,

Wow, this is so well-written, this chapter actually made me blush lol, I'll read the rest at a later date,

OH BURN ON MAGGIE! HA !HA HA HA HA HA

great story update soon I really like it

Owen smiling? It's a bit hard to imagine Maggie speaking out like that, but I suppose she'd be cocky about her superhuman strength and such after coming to terms with the change. This is the best Gargoyles fan fiction I have ever read. You have made a great mate for dear Brooklyn; strong, yet needing. I can't wait to see what she does next.

please, update! I really like this story. please continue writing.

hey i just wanted to say that i just read this and i think that it is awesome! even if you haven't updated in two i strongly suggest you should

OMG! Ya'll need to keep goin! THis is possibly the best fic I have ever read with Brooklyn!

it's good update soon ight' keep up the good work!

In the future is Aundri going to have a baby? Also I wanna see that Demona b* out of the clans way. Happiness rules!

Yay! Somebody is actually nice enough to give a deserving guy a wonderful gal! That really upset me when the Gargoyles season "Timedancer" didn't make it to T.V. I wanted to see Brooklyn as the main character. Oh well, your story makes up for it. Someone needed to tell Maggie off! Update please!

Yay! Brookln finally gets a girl! Update this soon!

that was nice, with audri saying,.. no one could catch me...lol.. that was a laugh