 ChikaMikk10 2009-11-16 . chapter 1I really love this story. Its dark, angsty and verry smexy ;) What I like the most is the hopelessness of France's situation and his need for England. I really want to beg you for more but at the same time I know that that would probably ruin the story. It was a great read. I loved every letter and its going on my favourites xD |
 VampireBunnyLord 2009-10-11 . chapter 1Oh my god, this made me tear up, I want france to just tell england already and them to get together. So sad. |
 Too Lazy to Log In 2009-09-07 . chapter 1 This fic seems to have the character's personalities down so well. Alfred is important to Arthur (whether it is sexual or not). Actually Alfred is Arthur's most important person. Any potential romantic relationship for Arthur is doomed because of this.
In Francis' case the relationship between him and Arthur starts out as one of main rivals, but all their attention is on each other. Then comes along Alfred. Suddenly there's this kid who Arthur adores. Francis is reduced to "that rival bastard."
The sad thing about this is in an alternate universe without Alfred they would probably end up together. Their personalities are definitely compatible enough. I just see Arthur and Alfred more compatible. They have more emotion behind their actions toward each other. |
 Lisbeth 2009-08-29 . chapter 1 That was really well writen. I mean it. One of the best psychology/lemon fanfic I have ever read.
Congratulations. |
 Smart-chan 2009-08-24 . chapter 1Oh WOW. I mean... I'm a massive USxUK fan.. and I am devoted to it... but I just felt like reading something different and I was not disappointed. This explains exactly WHY France could never REALLY be with England but your writing plays beautifully with the ideas, implications and... possibilities that may be kept in the souls of these two characters. The sex was hot-that's for sure. But the thing which won me over was the description of feelings and how both France and England were so much in character. This was simply beautiful, and please continue to write because otherwise I shall be a very sad person indeed.
All the best from a fellow author ~ |
 LePetitPappillon 2009-07-05 . chapter 1...okay...That was f*cking amazing...
because that's exactly how a realationship between them would work.
...Excellent, excellent job. |
 Kutsushita-Socks 2009-06-03 . chapter 1Oh France you bastard.
God I love this pairing SO MUCH and you did an AMAZING job and ajg357gasdf words fail me. |
 r-uoi 2009-05-31 . chapter 1Favourite fanfiction, possibly ever. I absolutely love how you've written this, you have the dark side of their relationship down wonderfully. <3 Perfect and beautiful |
 StarsOfYaoi 2009-05-28 . chapter 1oh, so it was you who wrote it for the kink meme! i was totally in love with this piece when i read it back there, i even saved the link so i could go re-read it more than once *drools*
so, i'll drop a review here (and place this on my fav list :D)
it was bloody amazing. the depth of the plot, the story, the meaning behind everything, france's thoughts that are so in chara for him, and the pain of knowing he can't have the only thing he's ever wanted dearly, and then the dub-con and what he did to america, just so he could taunt england for it...
and the ending. ach, the bitter ending. despite everything i still feel sorry for france's unrequited feelings. and for england. *cries*
gh, it left me speechless and in awe, so beautiful it was *clings*
now that i know who you are i can stalk you, sì? :D
SOY |
 Rainbow 2009-05-26 . chapter 1 Oh god.
I teared up toward the end of this.
T^T |
 twisted-sheets 2009-05-26 . chapter 1OH MY GOD.
Hi, I'm the OP!Anon who requested this. :D Well, not so anon now, am I?
So. This is just wonderful, and I love the emotions you portrayed here.
(Funny, two of the fills of the stuff I requested have been posted on on the same day. Ahahaha) |