town hold Overall great interaction.
Good telling of a green first flight.

How both they the green and her rider and the males chasing her.

He sent a message immediately to the womans abandoned fiancé, telling him where the couple was hidden. Her fiancé began planning his revenge. you miss something, and they don't have angels on Pern its has no religion.

Looks like she found her parents name, perhaps, that is how the beastcraftmaster knew them.

keen-> hum, at a hatching they keen when one of the died, and goes between.

Dragons have hide not scales,

Great Hall and windows, its Lower Cavern Main Dinning Cavern. Dragonrider do not alway fight to the death, if they die they lose their dragon between.

In hold/crafhall is that way, but recall that like dragon like rider.

DF F'nor get hurt by a proddy male green rider.

I am enjoying this story.
moeny-> marks, overall good interactions.

Yup, proddy green allright at first and then a very nice mating flight account - just at the right length. This is Anne-McCaffrey-level writing. 'Nuff said.

Let's see what will happen in the next installment d- go on.

Wow... that was hot. I hate using that phrase, BTW, but I can't think of any other way to describe it. I mean, damn, that was pretty impressive.

I love the story. I can't wait to see more.

Coming along nicely. The mating flight was nicely done. A bit more graphic than I would have written, but that can be chalked up to writing style. Nice touch about everyone swearing their version of the tale of the two lovers was the "threadbare truth". Great chapter. Definitely looking forward to more.

This story is coming along very nicely. I am looking forward to the next update - I hope it will be soon.

Keep up the good work.

please update very soon thanks nintschi

sad story cry.(
who was the dragon ? not the bronze ?
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she got a green yeah :)
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I love the dragonriders and tirelle
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great beginning I love the characters
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so she couldn’t really be blamed for throwing the large, unbound bale of fodder down on top or the Masterherder’s head So.

Realy great interaction between folks, a bit of twist between year and turn.

I hope to read more, a nice tale.