i like your story very well. it was a kind of funny reading saix speaking german because i'm german. you had only one little mistake when saix speaks first german. Du konst voll means in english you can complete ^^ You do very well, Xemnas is in german Du kannst das gut, Xemnas. perhaps you can change it so it's correct. but the rest of the german speaking is right.

WOW. That was... WOW. Where the HELL are all the tissues?! I loved the blending of different languages. It made the story that much more romantic!

That's so adorable! I am saving this!

Awesome story, very detailed and enjoying to read!

That is so sweet! I love it!