Honestly, the thought of James Wilson as secret agent seemed kind of ridiculous at first. But I decided to take a chance and I'm really glad I did. You kept everyone very in character, especially Wilson, and even though Wilson's physicality doesn't match up in my head with the physicality of a man who can kneecap a guy, Wilson's personality kind of does.

What I'm trying and failing to say is that I like this story and I hope you continue it.

Wow. It amazes me how people can write fics like it should belong on tv. This is awesome and I can't wait to see what happens next! Totally dying of curiosity. :D

Great chapter. Loved the progress of the case and can't wait to hear more about Wilson's past.

Oh, fun new chapter. I like the interaction you have between Rachel and the doctors, as well as Rachel and her mother. Very typical teenager.

And I'm wondering what's going on with Wilson. He's in some sort of protective custody? Or his brother is? I'm very confused, which I'm sure is your entire point.

Can't wait to see what happens next. I'm glad you managed to salvage it from your computer.

Does the girls ilness have anything to do with Wilsons work for the Agency or is it just House's case of the moment? I can't wait to see what happens with Wilson next")

Okay, I enjoyed the first two chapters but this third one had me hooked. It's always the quite ones you have to watch out for. Keep your friends closed and your enemies closer.

Dolores

Awesome chapter!
Can't wait for the next update!

Snappy! Witty! Sharp! Action-packed! Snark! Coming soon to a chapter update near you...Echoes (echoes, echoes, echoes) of a Song Half Sung...

Made my day to read such excellent prose, even House cheered me up, the old wet blanket.

Okay, couple of questions:
1. Did Wilson's brother die in the first scene?
2. When will that thing that he gave Wilson come into play, or will it come into play at all?
Awesome chapter!
Can't wait for the next update!

Awesomeness

Very interesting idea for a case, I like it.

Oh, lots of fun! I loved House using Chase as a segue into announcing that she was albino. Classic! And pulling Sesame Street in too was just fantastic!

Cannot wait to see what will happen next. Also, House leering at Cuddy is just spot on. Excellent job!

How long can Wilson keep this from house? Do the even have seconds for seconds? Can't wait to learn more")

Suann

I know I didn't respond to the first chapter. Simply because I had a time wrapping my head around the new genre. Not a House watcher, natch. BUT, now I am on track and anxious to see what wonders escape under your mystical tickling of the keyboards.

That song, you played it before. Play it again, Lem.

Wow. Superbly well written. I loved the plot in all it's detailed glory. Fantastic descriptions, good sentences, amazing grammar... Can't wait for chapter two.