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Neptune Butterfly
2009-11-09 . chapter 15
Wow, glad I wandered into this story! At first I didn't like the idea of Amelia/Xellos, but you two are pulling it off very well! I feel so bad for Zel. I hope him and Amelia get some REAL action soon before she finally chooses. ;) Good work and keep it up!

~NB~

P.S. I wonder where I can find my own Rezo booth. I really need a good place to take up my own fics again.
Ice Summon
2009-10-12 . chapter 15
It was so awesome to wake up to a new chapter this morning! And a very good chapter, at that! I'm finally inspired to get back to some of my stories currently in limbo. Since you guys have been so kind as to keep updating this one, I figure it's about time I did the same.
Leafwhistler
2009-10-08 . chapter 14
Has no one fed you lately? Sadness.
because writers love reviews more than dragon cuisine right? Thanks for the latest chapter. I like to see Xelloss helping out with the family chores. Perhaps Luna will make an appearance as well? Or has Lina truly escaped? *tehee* I like to see dishwashers and chefs in Seyruun tormented thus.
In all an amusing chapter. Zelgadis is getting some great reflection time. It is good to see him working over things in his head. I hope to see him implementing some sincere planning in the chapters to come.
Keep up the good work. Hope life clears up for you both soon.
roolsilver
2009-08-19 . chapter 13
You are the devil! I want more!
Seleana
2009-08-04 . chapter 1
Gosh, I love Xellos :) You write him so very well. I'm excited to read on into this. I've been busy prepping for a vacation, so, I've sort of been skipping over the posts about this on the Slayers comm on LJ. Now that I've read the first chapter, I regret that :P.
Leafwhistler
2009-07-24 . chapter 10
What! I can't believe no one had written you a review for this chapter yet! For shame...I love the idea of tasty emotions. Now I have something to ponder while I walk home at night. M...caramel.
I have to say I'm proud of Zel though. He gave himself a time frame to actually contsructively work on this problem instead of angsting in the corner. He is improving over the course of the story! Which is what all characters SHOULD do in writing. Change. Perhaps that is why I love Xelloss so much. He can change all the time...and still be in character.
Bravo. I wish Friday would arrive even faster. Keep writing!
King Of Nobody
2009-07-14 . chapter 1
Wow just Wow i loved it. Only one problem though it gives me a strong feeling to beat the hell out of Xellos >:3
AyaMonster
2009-06-26 . chapter 6
Nice, something to look forward to on fridays.
Leafwhistler
2009-06-13 . chapter 4
We'll try again as my last review got eaten by malicious and hungry electrons in cyberspace...the first review was better.

*sobs* I want a cool place to plot and eat too! Oh little red booth...I cry for your seperation. Um...okay I can't believe I'm coveting a plastic chaired section of a dining establishment. It's just because it sounds so cool. Let me go back and begin reviewing the actual story. Sorry about that.

It makes me giggle hysterically. I love the way Xelloss is playing ball. And I could very seriously see Zel's face when he read the dimensionaly note. It was priceless. In all a very nice start! I especially like the way you've contsructed Amelia. I find her a tough person's head to get into. At least without making her very flat. You've given her good dimension. Still in character, but still a real person. In all the fun with Xelloss and Zelgadis, please don't drop that dimension! I think that's my only caution.

I look forward to your Friday updates!
Aira Slytherin
2009-06-12 . chapter 4
Sorry for not reviewing sooner but moving can swallow up one's time like nothing else - the fic's still amazing, and the twists keep me on my toes big time! So naturally, anticipation for the next part is peaked high - especially with Xel's proposal at the end!
I'm sorry to hear about the Plotting Boot...but I'm sure even without it you two will write just as enticingly as you have till now! Good luck! XD
grima
2009-06-12 . chapter 4
Your story is so well written and intriguous that I can't wait for next Friday:) Carry on carry on! I wonder who will win ^^
GinTsuki
2009-06-06 . chapter 3
I want a plotting booth! Copy Rezo the Red booth... that mad me laugh! I'm so jealous.

Anyway, I like your story and I'm going to have to keep tabs on it now that I have discovered it. Your Xellos is devious! I want to see how this plays out.
Simple Plan
2009-06-02 . chapter 2
Great story.
I loved the grapes part of it, most legendary fruit EVER.
Aira Slytherin
2009-05-30 . chapter 2
It's getting better and better - and the L/G moments are an even nicer touch! The plotting definitely pays off - keep up the good work! XD
Ice Summon
2009-05-29 . chapter 2
I'm intrigued. Please go on! (I have to admit I'm a little jealous of the Plotting Booth and Rezo the Red Booth and so on. Reminds me of the stuff I used to do with my friends a long time ago.)
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