That was beautiful. Completely elegant and delicate. I do wish you'd write more, it's my favorite couple in the series and there just aren't enough good ones let alone stunning ones. Well done.

I read some parts of this in Kaze no Stigma... (not including the part about the bells)

someone copied this just to tell you

O.o Uh... wow...

Derp, that is all I can say to that.

Good job.(P.S. This is not a trap.)

Excellent story!

Beautiful

What more can I say?:D

i love it

I love how there's much detail in this and not once do you use their names. That in itself is very appealing to me.

I definitely would not classify this as smut or drabble. It was romantic and poetic.
The use of her hair and the phoenix was excellent.
Lovers' encounter in a somewhat forbidden ways builds heat.

Great Job.

IT'S CRAZY NEJI IS ONILY TEN!opps sry forgot to turn of CAPS

not bad i like it, good job, even though it's short, but i guess thats the point of a drabble

Whoa. . .very nice imagery. Well-worded, and tasteful. I like. Even though I prefer others with Negi, this couple ranks pretty high up in my favorites as well.