 April 2009-10-18 . chapter 1 I love how there's much detail in this and not once do you use their names. That in itself is very appealing to me. |
 Brain-Dancer 2009-10-09 . chapter 1I definitely would not classify this as smut or drabble. It was romantic and poetic.
The use of her hair and the phoenix was excellent.
Lovers' encounter in a somewhat forbidden ways builds heat.
Great Job. |
 Mafiamofo 2009-10-09 . chapter 1IT'S CRAZY NEJI IS ONILY TEN!!opps sry forgot to turn of CAPS |
 scout357 2009-09-10 . chapter 1not bad i like it, good job, even though it's short, but i guess thats the point of a drabble |
 Shadow Kitsune67 2009-07-10 . chapter 1Whoa. . .very nice imagery. Well-worded, and tasteful. I like. Even though I prefer others with Negi, this couple ranks pretty high up in my favorites as well. |