I love how there's much detail in this and not once do you use their names. That in itself is very appealing to me.

I definitely would not classify this as smut or drabble. It was romantic and poetic.

The use of her hair and the phoenix was excellent.

Lovers' encounter in a somewhat forbidden ways builds heat.

Great Job.

IT'S CRAZY NEJI IS ONILY TEN!!opps sry forgot to turn of CAPS

not bad i like it, good job, even though it's short, but i guess thats the point of a drabble

Whoa. . .very nice imagery. Well-worded, and tasteful. I like. Even though I prefer others with Negi, this couple ranks pretty high up in my favorites as well.