I loved it all! You've been doing a great job!

Cool story, glad you didn't kill off John. More please.

Great whump story! Poor John-never gets a break! Whump must be followed by comfort and kind of felt cheated here. Need to read that John is physically and mentally healing. Also want to know why it took so damn long for Atlantis to find him!

Hurry up and post the next chapter!

*drums fingers on laptop*

Do keep writing non-deathfics, so's I can read more of your stuff!

*flutters eyelashes*

;-D

Enjoying this so much

Loved the end to this chapter - very typical Sheppard

Cant wait for more

GREAT story! Keep it coming! Loved the ending to this chapter. Typical Sheppard.

Poor Shep. He has a long way to go but at least he is back safe in Atlantis. I hope his team get to make those you did this to him pay for what they did.

I really like this. Can't wait to see how Sheppard's recovery goes and if there are some things he won't recover from.

Don't stop writing, i really want to find out what happens. following with bated (is that spelled right?) breath.

Rescued in the nick of time. Great chapter. look forward to more.

great update - curious to see what's in store for the poor man once he gets around to healing!

Wow! Read the whole thing in one sitting and am enjoying it thoroughly...

Not to rush you or anything...but...more more more! :-)

Seriously, great imagery and use of language and I am looking forward to the rest!

The whump has been great - will it continue in the infirmary and I'm looking forward to the comfort and team input.

By now this place should be swarmed by angry Marines, Jumpers, UAVs, and at least one battlecruiser in low orbit scanning the heck out of planet. So...where is everybody? Lorne and co. cant even mount decent search and rescue mission without Shep? Shame.

yep, a rescue would suit me just fine... and i'm sure sheppard would agree, were he still speaking :P

looking forward to more!