Nice.

Nicely written, nicely constructed, and all around entertaining. Very real, too, if that can be possible for a story about giant robots XD I applaud. It's much better than the crap I've been seeing on this fandom.

...though I wonder what Optimus would look like too...

Aww sweet!

aw this is so cute. I love your interpretation of these characters! Its really great, I don't question it at all, or feel awkward when reading, totally get sucked in by the first paragraph. Love it.

I'm curious now what do they look like. Hehe! Well that was a great story. I always wanted to have an idea of what bumblebee looked like.
~KBG/Tsukiko

i get really sad when i think about sam dying one day :(
what would bee do??
:)
cute fic!
i love how... confused they are about each other. xD

That was amusing... but now I want to know what Ironhide and the rest would look like!

aww, that's so cute!

and I like hoow you make a whole story about holograms. most people just use them for pairing them with their favorite humans. like that is TOTALLY orignal.

you should do more, cause now I'M curious about how Optimus looks like.

Goodness, this is one adorable little one-shot. I'm really happy to have stumbled upon it. The interaction between Sam and Bumblebee is so spot on- I love Sam's characterization. He's still the goofy, charming kid we all know and love. I was also intensely interested in the analytical side of the story as Bumblebee broke down who he was and attempted to construct himself as human. It was rather fun to see it from an alien point of view. I loved reading this intensely! Great work!

Very interesting... I'd never thought of the difference in human and autobot imagination before. Must say, though, I do find it rather amusing. Especially trying to imaging the rest of the team as humans. For some reason, I just keep thinking of DeForest Kelley whenever I think of Ratchet ^_^
Also, your characterizations are wonderful. Beautifully done.

Oh, I liked this very much! It was amusing and sweet, and it was endearing the way Bee was at first reluctant to play Sam's what-if game, only to warm up to it as time went on. Definitely one for the favorites list!

I always wondered what Bee would look like as a human.. And the other Autobots.. And the Decepticons, too.. My head's gonna hurt from trying to imagine all of that.
Cute story:)

~VLS~

Definitely enjoyed this one. Though I kind of wish they had decided to do a reverse thing, like actually have Bumblebee show Sam what he would look like as a Autobot.
But I like how Bumblebee finally gave in, and then went further with it. Especially that he thought Sam would want to know about Optimus first.
Anyways, thanks for sharing!