Great job! I really enjoyed it!

I think you did an amazing job of fletchers narrative voice my only prob is that he seems distant a little too distant. I like May but I feel like it's sort of pedophiliac for him to like her that way. On top of that you've totally omitted Red. I mean even if your readers don't like slash you can't ignore the fact that Red is still his friend. But I'm not saying that that was your intention. By the by you are a great writer and I'm glad your on this site. However for everyone else who was bashing the people who can't write as good as everyone else, who made you king of anything? Everyone's different and everyone writes different, deal with it.

And pss this Fletcher moon is by far one of my favorite adaptations and i couldn't of done him better myself. Good job and kudos.

CUTE! I really did see them together, but all the fanfics are for Fletcher and Red! AGH! Thanks for writing this!

Happy writing!

Additionally, I get the feeling that the title was related to chemistry (Red-Ox or Reduction-Oxidation) where equations involve the balancing of charges of the ions involved. Ok. Now I sound like a geek. But that aside, it's like May and Fletcher are still balancing themselves and hopefully attain equilibrium. The title adds a nice touch considering that detectives have to know their share of chemistry. :]

I really like this. The writing style was similar to Mr. Colfer. Mature but not too serious, flustered yet not too stupid, and eloquent.

Thanks for writing this!

WOW!

This was really good, because you wrote in a similar style to Colfer and you set it out so well!

I also love Fletcher and May, they are a really cute couple!

Great job!

OddSakura is out!

You know what I like about this? Rarely do fanfictions based on books follow the style of the original author, even in the slightest way. You have managed to adopt a similar style to Colfer's by being true to the way Moon's inner monologue works, subsequentle creating something somewhat similar to what Colfer's work would feel like.

Really good job.

Wow! Finally someone who actually knows the characters they write about! Thank you for the great story!

Very cute, good, well written, blah blah blah, etc., etc., keep up the good work. I really liked it.

I haven't read this book in so long. I need to pick it up once more.

Glad there's something on this novel.

Wow that was really good. One of the few people on fanfiction who think they can write and who are actually very good writers. So many people ruin people's time by writing stories they think are good with so many spelling and punctuation errors you give up after the first chapter. Well, thanks for writing a great story.

I just finished reading Half Moon Investigations and went directly here to look for fanfictions. Not being a slash reader, naturally I picked your story. Honestly I did not expect it to be that good. This site runs rampart with tween writers who should spend more time in English class. Therefore your story was a breath of fresh air (to use the old cliche). Your characterization of both May and Fletcher and even the hints of Red and Hazel were spot-on. Keep up the excellent work, and if you choose to write more Half Moon Investigations fanfiction, I'll definitely come by to read and review them.

By the by, I think Fletcher and May could have been a cute couple as well.

Keep writing!

Ryan Brooklyn

This is brilliant! my favourite line is "I have solved enough cases in my lifetime to match the number of times Bella Swan described Edward Cullen using every positive adjective she can find in the English Dictionary...1"

Please carry on writing this, its great!

thought the rest of it was sweet

I like. A good approach on F/M. I hope to see more from you!

This was so sweet. Moon getting all tongue tied and flustered was adorable.

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