Was captain Nerefir only saying that Elfangor's parents and brother were dead? I guess Alloran Jnr inherited his mother's intellect. You need to check out the conversation on the fanfic lounge religion and animorphs vis a vis Rachel's religion. I look forward to the next story that is narrated by a recent animorph (such as Jeanne, Melissa, David, Alloran Jnr etc)

cool u ended the story! finally he proposed

There is no such thing as a drop bear, that is just a lie we make up for tourists, Australia has almost no natural predators aside from very poisonous snakes and spiders.

but yes i like the idea of a planet made up of australian animals. platypus are cute! marsupails are older than mammals and monotremes (like platypus and echidna) are older than marsupials.

Wow. It's so sad how Loren died! And Sergio is kinda freaky. But then again i guess useful to Tobias later on).

Can't wait to read more!

so enril and elfangor had s*x while they were platypi! so thats how they werre born? woah thats unexpected

Kelbrid

Thats whats in those crates right?

well it seems unlikely but it would be very ironic if the new job that Tobias has is actually helping his enemy plus his employer doesn't seems to know whats in the crates and i seem to remember the visser saying that the one sends him crates of the stuff(either that or I'm thinking that's what he said) so I'm gonna say that tobias and James are shipping Kelbrid

Ah i love Elfangor's sarcasm especially when he wants to smack his head into a wall that shows just how pissed he is LOL

Oh yeah and Rachel thinks that Tobias dreams of female Andalites? Man she must think that Tobias is REALLY messed up cause remember Al saying(thinking/narrating really"And, to be fair, only the severely disturbed would wish to see two members of an alien race engaged in such activities.
So Rachel though he was thinking about Females of an alien race... so that means that Tobias is severely disturbed by Al's standards.

cool! the next chapter finally but could u explain how allorn is born?

Gah! Cliff hanger! Even though this Enril story is a distraction from the main game I find myself enjoying it. Glad you updated, have fun with your family.

. Neat story! Please update soon, please! UPDATE!
Let's see... checklist...

Go to 70 The Memories (or whatever it's called. can't remember.) and ask for an update. Check.

Play torture game online. ...

Update own story. Torture game 2.5 can wait! *runs then hits a wall* Wrong way.

haha another epic chapter I love how baddass you've made Elfangor great job

Well done, interestingly the planet is similar to that of the Australian outback. the native species would have to be a desert animal. Remember that marsupials are not very intelligent.

Platypus are cute! but not harmful. I guess you need some information on Australia.

Wow! I love what you did with the end of 69... sorry i didn't review... coz i thought i had and then you posted this, so instead of reviewing both i thought i'd review this.

Wow that was confusing. Sorry about that.

I can't wait to see what you do with this. Wow... i totally agree with Shannara810. Just when you think that the surprises and cliffies and twists and turns can't get any bigger... they do.

Amazing. You're awesome)

O.o cliffie... I like the idea of the doem ship being named after the host of their enemy. Um, what did I just say? Anyways, YAY NEOMORPHS! YOU ROCK!You're my favorite writer on FF.N! (I'm crazy, can't blame me for being unusual and off-topic..) Is Guraff gonna appear? He's my favorite character! other personality says: Guraff and Toby is a pairing I'd like to see in the series... Oh be quiet, even though I agree, other self!

Elfangor? THAT ELFANGOR? o_o HELL!

When I think you cannot surprise me more... you surprise me more! Confronting Tobias' mind with Elfangor's will be very, very eventful. As far as what point is Tobias really Elfangor's son? Questions, questions, questions.

Now... you'll write about Al's mom too? He never spoke of her, so I'm really curious! Al went with his brother without a second thought, so I've always asked myself what kind of relationship the two had. In the books, Ax was pretty homesick, like only a kid far away from home can be but Al...
And Loren... and the Andalites...
I think it's better if I stop here, before boring you. Excellent work, like always.