Your story is still very confusing and needs a spell check. Also, I noticed that you had Joyce at the last battle, whereas Joyce had already died at this point. But I'm still reading this and still willing to see where you go with this, especially if you have Buffy meeting her previously absent father.

Your story has potential. The first chapter was very confusing though and not very well written. The second full chapter was put together much better, you seemed to have paid attention to your gramer and spelling. Hopefully, your third full chapter will continue to improve. By the way, is the other story you have posted the same as this one?