this has just gotten really interesting. please write more.

more please

Please write more?

This is as refreshingly origional story.

I can't wait for the next chapter =]

That magic experience with the land that Sarah had seems so charming and liberating! :D I wonder what Jareth thought when he saw Sarah running and twirling like a gypsy on his land! XD

I ca't wait to see what this encounter will bring!:D

Thank you for sharing this interesting and cool reading. Keep smiling. :-)

Yeah! Jareth has already find her! hihi. i can just see the spirit of the land wirling in the background, laughing with mirth while jareth and sarah speak then coming up to give them both hugs and kisses before disapearing in the bushes to stare at them not so secretly since it is still laughing. XD
I hope you'll update soon!^^ (Why did you have to cut it HERE !! T.T)

Can't wait until the next update. It will be interesting to see how her Grandfather reacts to her magick linking to the Goblin Kingdom.

Sarah and Jareth meet again, got to love it. I can't wait to see what happens next.

My my this is an enjoyable chapter, and just what is going to happen to Sarah for trespassing on Goblin Soil! I also wonder how successful will her grandfather be in getting Sarah back!

I also like how Sarah's betrothed seems a pleasant fellow, so far!

Well...that was fast.! ^^ Loved this chapter! Keep it up and update soon! I'm excited to read more!

I just stumbled upon this fic looking for good Labyrinth reads, but it is GENIUS! I love the plot so far and am so looking forward to when Jareth and Sarah see each-other again! Please update soon!

YES! MUAHAHAHA! I saw that coming... but it excited me when i read it anyway.

Yay for Sarah for kicking her grandfather in the butt but poo that she lost her chance of getting out.

Oh will, I did enjoy the little dance around that Alice did in the end until Caellum asked the right questions :P

I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter.

~ Iris

Magic is very complicate in your story...lets see what happen next.
Update soon please.