Wow, this story must be the best Final Fantasy ...not quite time travel fic I've read so far and I've read plenty of those.

Everyone is believably characterized and it's so nice that there's still stories with a plot that doesn't focus on the crying over unrequited love. Seeing somebody other than Cloud being the one who changes thing is awesome too. I really love Sephiroth's view even though I'm not the biggest fan of him. The way you portray the workings of the company and the labs is interesting as well(not so overly detailed that it bores the reader to tears but not completely left out either, like the hushing things up). And your Zack is such a joy to read. Whenever he gets mentioned I have to smile so hard. He's so bubbly and energetic and Seph should totally just smile around him, there's no escape.

Hm, I wonder how it would be if Sephiroth met the Aeris who's alive. :D The thing about no time in the lifestream confuses me somewhat, but that's okay 'cause I love thinking about time and other paradoxes. I feel like I don't know what I'm saying anymore.

Anyway, thanks for writing this and I hope you'll be able to update soon. Keep up the great work! :)

This is interesting. I like it. Who's the person at Nibelheim? The one that's teaching Tifa and Cloud? Is it Zangan or something like that? Please update soon. Thanx!

Oh poor Seph! I don't envy him at all for having to give that order... especially as his friends reacted as they did. (which is totally understandable) I'm sort of surprised it was Angeal who lashed out and not Genesis, but then, Angeal probably had the stronger ties to home and family. More to lose. Ah well, I hope things turn out ok... And speaking of things turning out well, I hope he learns about his family; that'll help ground him some, I think.

Also, great to see Cloud in the story, though it's sad to see him so lonesome and full of anger. Hope to see more of him, maybe? All in all, great update! Thanks!

Sounds great so far. I'm wondering, will Vincent be in this? It would great if he did. Can't wait to read more, update soon!

~Taps chin~ huh... Interesting... I'm really, really liking this, and I'm very excited to read more.

Now, get to Nibelheim, Sephiroth! ~Bounces impatiently~

I love what you're doing with the story. I get excited every time a see an update. Great job

So far, so good. Will Cloud become a major player later in this story?

Oh wow... Seph knows about Lucretia! *wonders how that will affect the world* Because, of course, he can never leave well enough alone... he'll have to find out all about her now. *chuckles* Great update!

This is an interesting read. Another alternative for Sephiroth's path. I hope to see more of it soon.

Impressive! Okay so I don't know how many times I'm going to say this but I LOVE what you're doing with this awesome fic! Zack is hilarious as ever. I like how you used magic during the battle even if it was just poisona. The action was really good too, loved it. Keep up the magnificent work! Looking forward to the next chapter! Can't wait! =)

What?! Who was that? And was Sephiroth dreaming of himself? It was a bit more like a nightmare. I like how you explained Hollanders background. Its good to see that Seph is okay but for how long. This mission to Banora should be very interesting. Can't wait to see what you did with it. Each chapter leaves me wanting to read more...and more after that XD. This is TOO awesome! I am hooked!

I see Hollander is acting a bit suspicious. Sephiroth being paired up with Zack, this should be fun lol. I wonder what mission though. So it was Aeris who made the blade go right into Sephiroths head. I love how everyone is very much in character. This story gets better with every chapter I read. You're doing such a fantastic job with it! Next chapter...

LOL! Oh I can only imagine what Lazard would do and say to a hospital scrub dressed Sephiroth XD. You are a genius! I've always wondered 'what if the events in Crisis Core changed'. I love how the story starts out and I also love the interaction between Sephy and Aerith. So can he only see her in his dreams? Sephiroth standing in a field of flowers in nothing but boxers, goodness, don't get me started lol. Interesting how Seph took the broken blade to the head instead of Genesis' shoulder. Poor Sephiroth, waking up to tubes here and there AND Hojo, what a sight to wake up to. I just wonder how everything will change. Sorry if my review is all over the place, its a bit late. Loved it! Must read more! =)

Hm...I'm interested. Don't let the lack of reviews bug you, you're doing a goos job of writing this. Keep up the good work.

Nice work. Can't wait to read the next chapter.