 dogbertcarroll 2009-11-06 . chapter 2LOL!
Not end well is still a giant step up from canon. |
 Dr Grimm 2009-08-28 . chapter 4This was cool. |
 Isamu 2009-08-04 . chapter 4The Shinji raised by Indy is I think my favorite, but the way too mellow Asuka is right up there too. |
 Firehedgehog 2009-08-03 . chapter 4very nice |
 Ares20 2009-08-03 . chapter 4 very cool, I liked it alot. |
 Innortal 2009-08-03 . chapter 4Nice work. |
 NefCanuck 2009-08-02 . chapter 4I dunno, this snippet seemed to lack *something*
What I mean is, the whole idea seems "grafted on to" the established canon, rather than it "blending" with canon. There isn't a seamless joining of the two disparate concepts (If that makes any sense as a comment) |
 Sun S. Li 2009-08-02 . chapter 4I would love to see this short of yours updated. |
 crimsonkyuubi 2009-08-02 . chapter 4please make this into an actual story. i love the crossover. |
 Fanf1cFan 2009-08-02 . chapter 4This and your first Indiana Shinji chapter were well written . . . I didn't notice any glaring violation of basic writing nuts and bolts rules, but I'd caution that your OOC character is trending towards becoming a Gary Stu. Well, Indiana Jones was sort of a Gary Stu, so I guess you can argue that you're being true to that character. Even so, if he doesn't break a sweat while defeating the angels bare-handed and sweeps Asuka off her feet with a glance, you won't have much of a story, will you? |
 slicerness 2009-08-02 . chapter 3finnaly got around to reading this. district 9 looks pretty good in your opinion how was it?
also do you know anywhere i can watch every neon genesis evengalion series without downloading them? |
 Wings of Lead 2009-08-02 . chapter 4Ya know, I can't help but wonder how Asuka would respond in this situation. She also holds a college degree, but gets stuck in class while Indiana Ikari teaches said class. |
 XRaiderV1 2009-08-02 . chapter 4another good indiana/eva cross.
enjoyed this one alot. |
 Wonderbee31 2009-08-02 . chapter 4Hmm, now this is something to read here, and enjoyed the idea of Teacher Shinji, and hope we might see this in a larger form one day. |
 Dr Grimm 2009-07-30 . chapter 3I can see Ritsuko experimenting on the Mini-Angels |