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dogbertcarroll
2009-11-06 . chapter 2
LOL!
Not end well is still a giant step up from canon.
Dr Grimm
2009-08-28 . chapter 4
This was cool.
Isamu
2009-08-04 . chapter 4
The Shinji raised by Indy is I think my favorite, but the way too mellow Asuka is right up there too.
Firehedgehog
2009-08-03 . chapter 4
very nice
Ares20
2009-08-03 . chapter 4
very cool, I liked it alot.
Innortal
2009-08-03 . chapter 4
Nice work.
NefCanuck
2009-08-02 . chapter 4
I dunno, this snippet seemed to lack *something*

What I mean is, the whole idea seems "grafted on to" the established canon, rather than it "blending" with canon. There isn't a seamless joining of the two disparate concepts (If that makes any sense as a comment)
Sun S. Li
2009-08-02 . chapter 4
I would love to see this short of yours updated.
crimsonkyuubi
2009-08-02 . chapter 4
please make this into an actual story. i love the crossover.
Fanf1cFan
2009-08-02 . chapter 4
This and your first Indiana Shinji chapter were well written . . . I didn't notice any glaring violation of basic writing nuts and bolts rules, but I'd caution that your OOC character is trending towards becoming a Gary Stu. Well, Indiana Jones was sort of a Gary Stu, so I guess you can argue that you're being true to that character. Even so, if he doesn't break a sweat while defeating the angels bare-handed and sweeps Asuka off her feet with a glance, you won't have much of a story, will you?
slicerness
2009-08-02 . chapter 3
finnaly got around to reading this. district 9 looks pretty good in your opinion how was it?

also do you know anywhere i can watch every neon genesis evengalion series without downloading them?
Wings of Lead
2009-08-02 . chapter 4
Ya know, I can't help but wonder how Asuka would respond in this situation. She also holds a college degree, but gets stuck in class while Indiana Ikari teaches said class.
XRaiderV1
2009-08-02 . chapter 4
another good indiana/eva cross.

enjoyed this one alot.
Wonderbee31
2009-08-02 . chapter 4
Hmm, now this is something to read here, and enjoyed the idea of Teacher Shinji, and hope we might see this in a larger form one day.
Dr Grimm
2009-07-30 . chapter 3
I can see Ritsuko experimenting on the Mini-Angels
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