I loved it. wheres chapter 2

I really like it. Please continue. I love how you made Kaitlin a seventh grader too. Nice job!

This could be a really great plot. I had a hard tome getting past the mistakes like "aloud" vs. "allowed." Proofread, proofread, proofread! :) Everyone has mistakes, so just look it over again. Happy writing! :D

OMG that was sooo amazing!

My sister got me hooked on the website recently but i've read a lot of stories so far but this is my favorite...seriously try to b an author and don't forget to keep writing about this story!

(mabye don't keep the names the same and publish this book)

write frikin more already!

That was soooo funny! I don't normally read stories in first person but this one had me totally engrossed!

this. is. great!

please keep writing!

I really liked it plz continue :)

Hey! Love how the story's proceeding. Also love how Jenna is the most popular girl in school but she's also the nicest. If you made Jenna a bitchy bimbo it would have been so cliche.

I really enjoyed reading the beginning of your story. You have a strong, appealing voice and your title is clever. Good job, keep it up! Have you ever read The Secret Identity of Devon Delaney? Because your plot seems similar...Please update soon!

Hello! Nice story you have there but you might consider looking through it first because i found some mistakes like typing Jared's name instead of Derrick's and i think that it is progressing too fast... Anyway, overall, not bad, at least your chapter isn't very short.

LOVE IT SO GOOD MAYBE SHE SHOULD HAVE A MAKE OVER BUT U CHOSE ITS YER STORY AFTER ALL. KEEP POSTING IM GOING 2 CHECK EVERY DAY :)

I really liked this! I actually love the series, but i didnt now there was a fanfiction category for it, but I might write a story for it :)

XOXOX,

Tess

i luv your plot line! i thought it was a ok first chapter. It didnt seem organized and a bit random at times.

keep writing it's great. i keep coming back and theres nothing more to read so hurry. I cant wait to read the rest!

Brilliant! I love it! (And Egypt is one of my favorite subjects.) Keep it up with your awesome writing!