What can I say, I think you wrote this absolutely beautifully. It's hard to imagine anyone writing a story like this without getting Priss terribly OOC, but you've pulled it off. You deserve to be proud of this story.

I originally wrote my Innocent Guilt story with the intent of submitting it for a fanfiction contest for a local anime convention, but as luck would have it the contest was discontinued that year, but I'm proud of it all the same even if I couldn't submit it.

Second? You should've won! I love this!