Not bad, but about 8 chapters too long. This has the feeling of free-writing to it. Have someone you trust take a look at it and together cut down on about 50-80% of the content. I honestly got the idea of the story just be reading parts of ch1, ch8, and ch9. Other than too much content, good job.

Your story rules! it reminds me of the song, 'tangled up in me' by skye Sweetnam. ^.^ YAY!

Nice ficie

Oh, boy!! I love this fanfic!! hehe It's very funny!

i don't have any words to describe how i love it! ok, i normally read ff where usagi and mamoru take the major roles. But this is wonderful! i just love the way usagi's so clueless about everything! And the way the poor poor poor couple just miss each other at every turn! A truly WONDERFUL story!

Aw nuts! I had trouble posting a review on this and it didn't say whether it was posted or not,sorry about that Moogle,but i'm sure you get the idea there on my comment,read only one please.Thank you.

Dear Moogle,even though it was a doozy,it was a good fic nonetheless for me because at long last I have finally found someone writing a fic about Mina and that volleyball guy she met in ep.100,and I thank you very much for that cause it's about time someone actually did that.

I think artemis like Luna doesn't really understand what it's like to be in love even after the S movie,could you write a story about those two next time(in human form that is.)and you fogot about asai admitting to Mina that he knows her secret about her being sailor Venus,but i'm sure that didn't come up until their marrage huh?

Anyways,nice fic and thank you for doing something that should've been done long ago.

Dear Moogle,even though it was a doozy,it was a good fic nonetheless for me because at long last I have finally found someone writing a fic about Mina and that volleyball guy she met in ep.100,and I thank you very much for that cause it's about time someone actually did that.

I think artemis like Luna doesn't really understand what it's like to be in love even after the S movie,could you write a story about those two next time(in human form that is.)and you fogot about asai admitting to Mina that he knows her secret about her being sailor Venus,but i'm sure that didn't come up until their marrage huh?

Anyways,nice fic and thank you for doing something that should've been done long ago.

Dear Moogle,even though it was a doozy,it was a good fic nonetheless for me because at long last I have finally found someone writing a fic about Mina and that volleyball guy she met in ep.100,and I thank you very much for that cause it's about time someone actually did that.

I think artemis like Luna doesn't really understand what it's like to be in love even after the S movie,could you write a story about those two next time(in human form that is.)and you fogot about asai admitting to Mina that he knows her secret about her being sailor Venus,but i'm sure that didn't come up until their marrage huh?

Anyways,nice fic and thank you for doing something that should've been done long ago.

Dear Moogle,even though it was a doozy,it was a good fic nonetheless for me because at long last I have finally found someone writing a fic about Mina and that volleyball guy she met in ep.100,and I thank you very much for that cause it's about time someone actually did that.

I think artemis like Luna doesn't really understand what it's like to be in love even after the S movie,could you write a story about those two next time(in human form that is.)and you fogot about asai admitting to Mina that he knows her secret about her being sailor Venus,but i'm sure that didn't come up until their marrage huh?

Anyways,nice fic and thank you for doing something that should've been done long ago.

Hilarious..the poor dear finally got a boyfriend. Sailor V for Victory! XD lol..funny stuff!

I can't believe how funny this was! I was rolling in the aisles, giggling like a little girl. Keep it up, this was great!

Ahhh...what an entertaining story, I haven't laughed so much since, well, since "The BIG Wish"!

Woohoo! EXCELLENT ending! So glad you tied up loose ends in the final chapter. Like usual it was funny and exciting!

For those who haven't read this story yet, break out a box of tissues because you're going to be laughing until you cry!

This story is so VIVID you can actually picture yourself watching all of this unfold right in front of you. Every one of Minako's near-misses and bad dates are so painfully funny. Yes painfully since you'll be laughing so hard your sides will hurt.

Read this if you haven't and even if you had read it AGAIN! It's by far the FUNNIEST comedy I've EVER read!

pretty funny and interesting keep up the good work