How did I not review this? I read this awhile ago, and thought it was awesome. Great job!

that was a great story

Aside from the title being in obnoxious all caps, a good story. :)

Love the follow up - will like more stories between the two Harry's.

I'll be honest an say that I never saw The Dresden Files, but I do like this story...a lot. I always enjoy it when someone injects a little common sense and hits a few HP characters with the clue-by-four.

Enjoyable, but you really needed to be more specific about how Dresden helped the kids (other than the guns). You needed to show at least a couple of sessions where the kids were learning guerrilla tactics and Dresden-style battle magics. And you needed to show them using some of what they learned in the DoM battle. You at least showed a Weasley gas grenade. I would also have ignored some of the OotP movie nonsense such as the kids falling several floors and then arrested by an invisible air cushion because the door opened into nothing. I liked that Luna was the best marksman, but she was completely ignored in the battle. I'm glad Sirius lived and Voldemort died.

You made a big deal out of Ron not getting to be trained to use a gun earlier, but now he has one hidden in his robes!

A few times you spelled Dolores Umbridge's last name correctly, but far more often you spell it Umbrage, which is wrong and distracting. I notice a lot of people misspell her first name too, but so far you haven't.

I enjoyed your first story in this series, and this one's good too.

This was a really good story. I was wondering: is there going to be another sequel?

Great story and amazing how one person can make so much of a difference. Thanks for sharing!

it's port key not portkey

Dear ulyferal,

Your stories: Welcome to America Harry Potter and An American wizard at Hogwarts, were fantastic! I really enjoyed reading them and couldn't wait to find out if you had updated them. I can't believe their finished.

Thank you for brightening up my day with your words, and hoping you write another story in that series,

Bebe Myne

The ending seemed to come on quickly, but then, if it didn't, I think you'd have to drag it out, and that would not be good. So, overall, I give you Moderate Epic. Translation: Long, but not too long, Epic, but not mind-blowingly long in the grandiose score of Epic. For a Harry Dresden, this is just right.

Brilliant powerhouse chapter with excellent pacing and it just keeps going and going and going...

Yea! I finally got to this after ffnet reset all my alerts to disable. Yes, disable. Had to re-set them, and then find this one is updated, and now, game on, brutha! Which, you might not be one, but still: Game ON!