Ok,
I'm a recent convert to the KOF fandom, and read a bunch shitty stories here and there until I stumbled upon your gem.

This is one of the best fighting game fanfictions I've ever read; it beats out all the 30+ chapter epics I've seen of the various fandoms, and all the one shots with fantastic descriptions their of their settings that make me feel as if I'm there. Why?

Because I've actually felt moved by it all.

All of the problems, the "relationship", it all felt plausible, it felt real. It was to point where I really couldn't give out a well- rounded critique. My only small complaint is that the switch of POV felt a little choppy to me. I hope you like blind praise.

It's sickening that there aren't more reviews of your work. Please don't let that stop you.

This deserves more recognition. It was amazing.

Really amazing. I rarely find writing like this - you capture so much motion and expression with so few words. It reads like poetry. Silk.

And I love and adore it. Well done.

Wow! I've never seen this side of Iori and Kyo before, but I love it! Please write more and send an email or something so we can know what happens next.

Aww, Iori and kitties, anyone would fall in love with that. (But of course, Kyo wouldn't admit to loving Iori and Iori either. Tsk, boys.) It's nice that it ain't all sugary when they get together, cause honestly, these two never are about sweet love.

I really like all ur iori and kyo stories! If there are other places i can read ur stories could u send me an email?