This is magnificent. Extraordinarily well written and plotted.

I wish you would continue it-and yet, it is perfection by itself.

Perhaps in time there could be two Riders of the Storm.

This is an incredibly gripping and powerful piece of writing. First person POV is very difficult but you obviously have the ability to wield it with superb skill. I can only say bravo and recommend this piece to mt friends.

This has been a really interesting reading. Thank for sharing it with us. So Keep smiling. :-)

Lovely. I miss your writing and your story telling and, perhaps most of all, your Severus. I would very much love to see a longer piece of work... maybe, now that term is over? :O)

-cl

What a wonderful piece of work! I loved it in it's entirety. I hope you write again.