Lol! So great! That would've been priceless, I like Takumi but he is an idiot, and I know Hachi IS stupid but really, I doubt she's THAT stupid xD I mean... a bad dream?? So... Takumi is a mean idiot! I absolutely loved the: “But…” Sumika muttered. “Is she that stupid?” “Of course! That’s why she’s my wife"
I hope you continue! You really made me laugh!

I really love how you write Hachi in this. Sounds just like her.

To be honest, I laughed as I neared the end.You captured Hachi really well.Very nice short story, to the point. I like it. Keep it up.

Hey,I just finished reading your story!
I love your idea and I can't wait to read more about Takumi,Reira,Hachi and ... the other girl(I can't remember her name ^^" ).
Please,write more ! ^.~