Hello,

intersting story, I like your idea of the narrow-minded and thus weak amazons.

Just one favor: could you change the German translation to "the world's strongest", since I am German I can give you the correct translation: "der Stärkste der Welt / der Staerkste der Welt".

Thanks.

A most wonderful ending. Spot on.

Despite what you've asserted, your Kyle character is an SI (an original character at least partly based on yourself, even if not fully), and also a Mary Sue (technically Gary Stu), as he is inserted into the story to fix problems, and end up romantically with the main character.

My big question is, why is this story listed under Ranma and Akane, when they are not the romantic pairing of the story?

This was a great freakin fanfic. Salute!

Fanfic was good, Kylemoor. Keep on keepin on.

You didn't like it? Where are you from? Uranus? It was excellent!

first of all don't take personally what I'm about to say okay but I think you could've done a hell of a lot better with the idea this fic is based of.

Good goin, Kylemoor. Keep on keepin on.

This flows very well. In response to your response to my esrlier review I feel you're doing a good job the way you utilize Kyle in your story. Carry on.

This was an interesting chapter... isn't Cologne a type of perfume for men or something?

This is an excellent piece.

heh, cool! that's all i can say. sorry...

Good work here, fella.

GREAT CHAPTER! (*x4) Great fight, Great way to end the chapter!

Love the way you write this.