that was cool! Although, poor allen for being all alone... thats just sad.

Hi,
I just wanted to say that I was pretty impressed with your story. I like the changes in Allen's mind and how you keep him in character managingat the same time to make it look like he is different from the usual Allen. I also like the Fourteenth short lines very much. I'm not sure where this is going, but I sure am enjoying reading it. Great job!

somewhere along the second chapter you lost me o.o then i was reading realising i dont quite get part of it o.o so basically... allen is umm... old(100++ years old is it?) xD and for some reason he comes to hogwarts and um... does smth about that ring on dumbledore's hand and then dont know what happens and he becomes an assistant teacher and umm.. he killed krum grandfather? and this story is set like in the 4th book? if im correct then i think this story is not bad :D if im wrong then... sry o.o im reading this at 1.48am and having horrible muscle aches... no idea how the muscle aches affect anything except for the fact everytime i move my legs i go ouch ouch ouch xD

OKAY! looking forward to more :D hehe :D

Smile :D~

PLEASE ADD THIS UP ON YOUR UPDATE LIST :( i really like this

Very interesting, I can't wait to see where you go.
~GC~

Interesting. But lulu-chan is not that bad. She's cute!

DAM the evil cliff hangers!! i really like your story keep up the good work!! and cant wait for the next chapter

Hm... I like this.. I like it a lot... Such an amazing story, with so much potential yet to be had, and so much awesome already had...

I congratulate you on a stunning story, thus far. I have not read your other stories yet, but because of the awesome that this story is, I will take a peek. A rare thing for me to do, actually.

I absolutely love the way you are telling the story too. Rather than taking all the words from the Harry Potter books, you focus on Allen's thoughts. I like that the reader has to have read the book, basically, to know what's happening with the trio, so you *can* focus on Allen. Truly, a great crossover.
Keep up the fantastic work.

more soon please!

...if Allen's the only one left, what happened to the others? Did they all die fighting the Noah? What about the Finders, scientists, etc?

weell it was a little confusing at the end of the chapter but that might just be me...


thank you so much I love HPXDGM fanfic.^^

next chapter pls!

I kinda have no idea what this is about... AND I havent read it. =D BUT. You know who I am... RIGHT? RIGHT? O.K. Pretend I have read this and I say this is awesome... well written? Yes. Well written. Bye =] I like whipped cream. :O

I've procrastinated on reading this and other FFs because I've been busy with school work. >-> But I finally got around to read it, and I'm glad I did.

Excellent chapter!
I like how you sort of tied Krum in with Allen, what with Allen killing his great-grandfather.
Also, you're teaser at the bottom is intriguing me... Why must you taunt me so! D:

Anyway, keep up the great work! I'll be watching for the next update, and I'll try to read/review sooner this time!

I love this. I really do. Your writing style is so... guh. It's just so amazing, so freaking AWESOME, and I'm wishing right now I have your writing style.
And very awesome story, btw. ;D