what no why is he dying why, lol come on keep writing

Hey, what is next? I hope you update soon... This story/chapter (you state 'complete' but it's far from complete, so I'm not sure how to consider it) leaves more questions then answers, and that guard was pretty vile. I wish I would know at least if Aragorn is in good hands now or not. "Estel" sounded like Legolas, but the next yelling was not very Legolas-like...

Hello! This beginning is very good. I love it. Poor Aragorn has gone through the hurt, but has no one to comfort him! Poor Aragorn. You do a great job of describing his misery and pain. But now it looks like he might be in trouble again, if the man calling to him is one of those men who originally caught him...or maybe it is someone else? He is not weak and he needs to realize that, he's just in misery here. He'll figure that out. He could sure use some help right now, though. Help him out, Sivan...or not. This is going to be an awesome story and is so far. Wonderful!!