| Reviews for Broken |
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EternallyJaded1 9/19/09 . chapter 16Jasper STOP! I need the next chapter! Please update soon! I cried at Carlisle's prayer, it was so sad. Poor Emmett, but once again I am so glad that he has Rosalie. I also have a newfound respect for Marcus, after the last chapter. I LOVE your work. You are my favourite writter of all time (professional or otherwise), you should write a novel! |
TillITryIllNeverKnow 9/18/09 . chapter 16That is such a cruel place to drop us! Seriously though, I was blown away by your solution: they become human and then start the process all over again. Genius! Such genius! |
gilliam-melissa 9/18/09 . chapter 16WOW! That was a wonderful chapter...to find the antidote and to have them be cured of what they are...brilliant and then have to be turned again, amazing, I loved it. Now if Jasper can just stop before he kills Alice...I now he will find the strength, he has to... Can't wait for another update! Your fanfic fan, MG |
Reina Valeria Nox 9/18/09 . chapter 16oh no! |
Lilacs46 9/18/09 . chapter 16Oh please, I beg you. Don't allow Jasper to kill Alice. My heart couldn't bear it if you did. |
jess.not.ie 9/18/09 . chapter 16I read all previous 15 chapters over 2 days and then when I finished you updated. I gotta say I really love this story I love how you have written it in third person yet concentrating on the different couples. This chapter has left me with lots of questions and theory's to think about. I can't wait for the next update. Thanks -j |
Tashiipear 9/18/09 . chapter 16 Bad Jasper, bad! Down boy. LULz. Good story, but Rosalie and Emmett are a bit out of character. I doubt Jasper would try to suck Alice, but it doesn't seem amazingly different from who he is. I look forward to more! |
Sillybookwarm 9/18/09 . chapter 16Aw... you just had to end it right there... Update soon! |
Cymbeliness 9/18/09 . chapter 16Wow I did not see that coming! Fabulous chapter can't wait to read more! |
Enthralled 9/18/09 . chapter 16Geezums...with an ending like that, you need to update a whole heck of a lot quicker! |
VoldieBeth 9/18/09 . chapter 16James did say Alice was the best smelling human he ever came across. I hope Jasper stops, nothing would destroy him more knowing that he killed Alice. I can't wait for more! |
911turbowriter 9/18/09 . chapter 16Oh mY Jasper! you cant leave us hanging like that! (though I am guilty of the same thing in my stories) haha UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE. |
Lethologica86 9/17/09 . chapter 16So Alice would have been Jasper's singer if she were human. I think Jasper would have some new respect for Edward now, Jasper couldn't resist his temptation though. I loved it. I absolutely love it, there is something so beautiful and sweet about it. Carlisle needs to yank him off though, he better not kill Alice or else! |
steprightup 9/17/09 . chapter 15OMG! what happens to JASPER? please update this! it is great :D |
sogently 9/15/09 . chapter 15fuck, I want to cry. even if they might have found the cure, I want to cry for Jasper and his sacrifice. your writing is excellent, thank you for sharing this unique story. |