 NarutoBlackmail 2009-10-23 . chapter 1I LAUGHED FOREVER
Bonus points for pwning Sony-Mae. |
 Akira Cat 2009-06-16 . chapter 1I LOVE this story! I love the punchline at the end! A nice slash fic without the detailed sex scenes. Good job sis! |
 FeralJester 2009-06-08 . chapter 1Bravo on 2 points
1. Firstly, I'm glad you did this. People of that persuasion need to be taken down a notch and you held the story together while doing so. Consider me subscribed for life, my friend.
2. This is the internet. The only thing you should be serious about are things with lives on the line and even then, what's life if you aren't laughing.
Twisted, I know, but then again someone dedicated an entire story to trashing on someone. The line between wrong and right has been blurred |
 I Try To Be A Good Samaritan 2009-06-06 . chapter 1 I just thought I should say, I really don't think it was very nice of you to insult Sony-Mae like that in your story. I always say that if you have a problem with someone, you should just talk to them about it instead of insulting them behind their back. Please don't use your writing talent to insult people, no good comes from it. |
 katie 2009-06-05 . chapter 1 Good job, I'm happily suprised. Normally I avoid slash/yaoi fanfics because the descriptive scenes with the "dirty stuff" in them kinda grosses me out (FYI: scenes like that with hetero couples gross me out too. Hey, I am only 13), but this piece told the story and got the point across without creeping me out because it focused on the actual thoughts and emotions, rather than the "dirty details". Well written, interesting, and (thankfully) rated PG. |
 PurpleGirly 2009-05-31 . chapter 1Aww, that was cute.
Short, sweet and funny. I liked it!
Good Job, TwilightGirl! |
 00Kakkoi00 2009-05-30 . chapter 1Yay! new Run/Tech! please write more :) |
 Reviewer 2009-05-29 . chapter 1 Hm... not sure how I feel about this one. The ending lines were funny, but I felt like this was just a way to make a shot at an online person. If you have a problem with somebody, sure, I don't care, but to tie it into a story? Sounds a bit immature. |